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Writing Challenge - L Words  
Sponsored by: Constance La France

Written 7/17/2023

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I sit by the edge of the clear large lake, My chin against my knees, a breath I take. Idyllic warm sun adheres to my wake; I lift my hands; pray, this joyous daybreak. Enchanted by the seasoned run away, unfasten thoughts of day-by-day workday. A cheerful tranquil moment sets at bay As I gaze out the caramel gateway. The sun's glow wanes at a distance array; Warm honey bathed the shore melting away. Reality wanes through a hue archway; A fond moment stolen, beside me lay.

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Date: 7/24/2023 2:12:00 PM
Hats and horns, confetti, too. Congratulations, winner….you.! Pangie
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Date: 7/21/2023 9:25:00 AM
Eve, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge L Words !
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Date: 7/21/2023 12:44:00 AM
Picturesque writing on Lake. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/20/2023 10:11:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Lake" again. Have a wonderful day....................
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Date: 7/18/2023 12:10:00 PM
Your "Lake" is a lovely write/story. I would love to be at a lake for the summer. I also did the L. Enjoy your day.....................
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Date: 7/18/2023 5:40:00 AM
I can relate well to one Eve. Often I can be carried away by memories of country life. Nice one. God Bless, JB
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