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Writing Challenge - L Words  
Sponsored by: Constance La France

Written 7/17/2023

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Lake

I sit by the edge of the clear large lake, My chin against my knees, a breath I take. Idyllic warm sun adheres to my wake; I lift my hands; pray, this joyous daybreak. Enchanted by the seasoned run away, unfasten thoughts of day-by-day workday. A cheerful tranquil moment sets at bay As I gaze out the caramel gateway. The sun's glow wanes at a distance array; Warm honey bathed the shore melting away. Reality wanes through a hue archway; A fond moment stolen, beside me lay.
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Romios Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 2:12 PM
Hats and horns, confetti, too. Congratulations, winner….you.! Pangie
La France Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 9:25 AM
Eve, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge L Words !
Alex Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 12:44 AM
Picturesque writing on Lake. Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 10:11 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Lake" again. Have a wonderful day....................
Goldsmith Avatar
July 18, 2023 at 12:10 PM
Your "Lake" is a lovely write/story. I would love to be at a lake for the summer. I also did the L. Enjoy your day.....................
Ball Avatar
July 18, 2023 at 5:40 AM
I can relate well to one Eve. Often I can be carried away by memories of country life. Nice one. God Bless, JB
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