''Lady Queen's of Queen's''

Lady Queen's Of Queen's
Where? ''ladies'' maybe
Take a chance of romance thus
As whomsoever excels this memorable
Glance thus ''chance after chance''
We've observed the muse to be excused
When? exhaled breath stops to then breath
In separate ways amongst one sentence
Said within a huge sized breathless breath
Forever sleeps When? applied to die in disguise
Thee ''lady Queen's'' feels When? she's
Feeling thus an diseaseful illness
Concludes Who? kills to be heeled
Why? ''hungered feelings'' substitutes to
Cure those everlastingly opened doors
However, cures needlessly needy ''ladies of
The Queen's'' blinds us ''useful Queen's''
As
What? keeps ''joyous time'' to spread even
More joy to enjoy
Beforehand eased to ''wait until exhale'' excepts
Lady Queen's of Queen's!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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May 6, 2016 at 9:30 AM
MAKEDA, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. ~SKAT~
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April 24, 2016 at 11:20 AM
Makeda Costello, nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv *LINDA*"
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May 3, 2009 at 1:34 PM
Makeda, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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April 26, 2009 at 1:44 PM
Congratulations, Makeda on this interesting write becoming a "first round survivor" and best of luck in the contest!
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April 10, 2009 at 4:46 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals Makeda. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Mason Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 11:00 AM
Fascinating write using a very difficult form!! I like the repetition of the title within this piece and I'm wondering if you mean to say "healed" in line 13 ? The word "heeled" also works here but takes on a darker meaning connected to "diseaseful illness" ... works either way but I had to add my two cents ... LOL ... hope you don't mind ... congratulations on your writing being selected this week, Makeda !!
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March 29, 2009 at 12:16 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. GB Always, Tyesha
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March 26, 2009 at 9:11 AM
congrats on having your poem featured this week! keep up the good work!
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March 26, 2009 at 7:48 AM
Congratulations Makeda on your sonnet being featured. Vince
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March 26, 2009 at 4:30 AM
Congratulations on having this lovely write featured this week. Smiles from Lolita
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March 25, 2009 at 10:30 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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March 25, 2009 at 8:49 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Kirstie
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March 23, 2009 at 6:10 AM
Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Love, Shar
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November 19, 2008 at 8:28 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. Please continue with your writing and share it with the world. Love, Carol
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November 4, 2008 at 11:06 AM
Inspirational poetist
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