Lady In the Water

elongated shimmers reflect
 the water of movement
 on her face,
 
life swirls around
 brushing past
 
unseeing
 
she stares into liquid pools of light
 blinded as a supernova
 peeks out from inside
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Guzzi Avatar
February 5, 2014 at 8:33 AM
haunting free verse! a watery death and a rising! Light & Love
Eggins Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 4:55 AM
thanks for the comments ladies they were much appeciated hugs Jayne
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December 7, 2012 at 6:14 AM
A good poem Jayne ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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