Lady In Grey

The hopes that she stood on were taller than reality,
But from such heights she could see very far,
On the bounds of what she dreamt of she thought
there must surely be,
her love, her life, her anchor, guiding star.

To any passing paramour she stretched out willing hands
and for brief moments desperately clung
but trying to pluck roses from where stalks of nettles stand
eventually leads to getting stung.

He hove to view like sunrise, warmed her face and lit her eyes
a chiselled jaw and eyes of polished steel
an easy charm that could disarm completed the disguise
all boxes ticked, he answered her appeal.

But like the locusts in their swarms that seek to overpower
his time with her was brief then he was gone
he stripped her harvest, plucked her heart, and then her soul devoured
and left a hollow shell, her dreams all gone.

She tightly gripped the bannister and gazed three floors below
this staircase she chose for her last device
swung over both her legs and without pausing she let go
and thus in just one day she'd fallen twice.

Today she welcomes visitors with arms out to embrace
though no-one takes her offer, just like then
for the beyond has stretched a silken veil across her sallow face
protecting from more sorrows, that are men.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Shaw Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 7:15 AM
You never fail to amaze me "Viv" - I love all of your writes - all of your depth - I feel I know you - though we have never met . . . ; )
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 5:08 AM
I remember commenting on this amazing write Viv, but dont so e my comment here now. Congratulations on your second placement. I am honored to be in your company my friend! ; ) 7
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August 29, 2016 at 1:40 PM
Hi Viv, Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Wigley Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 2:05 PM
Thanks, Alexis, appreciate the visit. regards, Viv
Smith Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 12:29 PM
Terrific write Viv, congratulations...
Wigley Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 2:05 PM
Thanks, Charlie, a bit of a gloomy phase for a while. Viv
Scars Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 10:11 AM
Viv, very good poem and I love the pic that you chose...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
Wigley Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 2:08 PM
Thanks for the placement, Laura, now get back to cheery and kooky :) x
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August 25, 2016 at 3:22 PM
What an amazing and vivid write, Viv! I was totally caught up in the story of this haunting spirit and the tale of her demise. Excellent imagery and really captured the spirit, 7+
Wigley Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 12:15 AM
Thanks, Laura, funny how subjects for poems crop up from nowhere, isn't it? Viv x
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August 24, 2016 at 3:44 AM
The picture reminds me ever so much of the Parr family mansion that stood for years up in the old wood - The footings of this once huge building are still there, and still visible amid the undergrowth of the walled grounds. Great atmosphere, Viv - Loved it! My very best regards. :) john
Wigley Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 8:12 AM
Thanks, John, written in complete darkness- literally. At some silly hour. The Muse doesn't work regular shifts. Thanks for stopping by. Regards, Viv
Vaso Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 10:36 PM
Viv, this is dark, this is poetry, great write!
Wigley Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 11:14 PM
Thanks Arthur, I must lay off eating mature cheddar before bedtime . Regards, Viv
Turner Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 11:31 AM
You held my attention throughout this magnificent write Viv. Which basically confirms the belief that most men are "pigs" and most women are too "dramatic" Way too many great lines to quote starting with the very first one. Just great poetry! I love this 7.
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August 23, 2016 at 2:10 PM
Thanks Daniel, I know ghost stories should be left until the night before Christmas, but these lines came into my head at 2:00a.m this morning, so I had to get up and finish them. Regards, Viv
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