Tim Smith Poet Sonnet

Lady In Blue

Moonbeams beckon on my window tonight
Dragging me out of this comfort to view
Delicate splendor impassioned so bright
Refulgent waves from this lady in blue

Dazzling in beauty, dignity and grace
Taut string of pearls adorning her bare neck
Highlight her dimpled and delicate face
Her eyes enchanting with a caramelized fleck

Soft scarlet lips with a wry little smile
Yellow cloth headband holding her silk hair
I stand there in awe and gaze for awhile
As sweet scents of lilacs float through the air

Strong my heart thumps for the lady in blue
Finally knowing my dreams could come true

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Richard Lamoureux October 30, 2016 at 10:19 AM Now this is how you do a Sonnet! Lovely!

Robert Heemstra February 29, 2016 at 5:31 PM That's the way sonnets were suppose to be! That was perfect sonnet Tim! Great job!

Red Fiery February 28, 2016 at 7:34 AM This Lady is really beautiful and you have done complete justice to her beauty. The poem is marvellous and the poet is more than my description ( simply amazing !) I would like to read more from you...hugs Red

Mothiram Pushpala February 28, 2016 at 12:28 AM What a romantic song! Nice imagination and expression. Poetic to the core and thrilling to the end. Congratulations on your great skill.

Denis Brezik February 28, 2016 at 12:12 AM nice read thanks

James Inman February 27, 2016 at 8:56 PM Tim, lovely write.

Cindi Rockwell February 27, 2016 at 6:05 PM Beautiful! I can see her! Thanks for sharing an congrats on POTD!! Tim Smith February 27, 2016 at 8:31 PM Thank you for your kind words Cindi

CayCay Godwin February 27, 2016 at 2:05 PM A beautiful sonnet ... CayCay Tim Smith February 27, 2016 at 8:29 PM Thank you very much CayCay

Carlene Simpson February 27, 2016 at 1:13 PM I can surely see her now......Congrats to you and your 'lady in blue', Tim Tim Smith February 27, 2016 at 8:29 PM Thank you Carlene

Casarah Nance February 27, 2016 at 12:20 PM Congrats on poem of the day Tim, this is really nice, I've read it a few times now and the colors really paint the soul :) Tim Smith February 27, 2016 at 8:28 PM Thanks Cas. I was surprised at this one.

Daniel Turner February 27, 2016 at 11:11 AM Congratulations my friend on POTD. I told you this was a great sonnet. Peace my friend:) Tim Smith February 27, 2016 at 8:26 PM Thanks again my friend..

Charmaine Chircop February 27, 2016 at 9:55 AM This is exceptionally beautiful, filled with such vivid imagery, almost like a painting by the moonlit sea-shore. A fave. Tim Smith February 27, 2016 at 8:25 PM Thanks Charmaine . It would make a beautiful painting. : )

Anne-Lise Andresen February 27, 2016 at 6:58 AM - Romance will always delight, congratulations p.o.t.d. Tim !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Tim Smith February 27, 2016 at 8:24 PM Thank you A-L...I was surprised at the selection

Arthur Vaso February 26, 2016 at 10:00 PM Beautiful poem, where the heck is this place, love to see that me self! :) Tim Smith February 27, 2016 at 8:23 PM Come over and we can look together the go watch the puck drop...thanks for the help in our quest for the Cup....you did get a quick young center in return though

Maurice Yvonne February 26, 2016 at 5:29 PM A really really great romantic sonnet. This is a fav for me. Tim Smith February 27, 2016 at 8:21 PM Thank you my good friend

Nette Onclaud February 26, 2016 at 11:33 AM delicately charming, tim... good job!..huggs Tim Smith February 27, 2016 at 8:20 PM Thank you nette

Jan Allison February 26, 2016 at 4:08 AM stunning sonnet Tim:-) hugs Jan xx Tim Smith February 27, 2016 at 8:17 PM Thank you Jan.

Timothy Hicks February 26, 2016 at 1:08 AM The woman you describe is a real sapphire, Tim. Your words were adequate to paint the dreamy atmosphere, to conclude in a ray of hope. Tim Smith February 27, 2016 at 8:17 PM She shines bright like a diamond (sing along) bright like a diamond...lol...Thank you

Daniel Turner February 25, 2016 at 11:06 PM Great sonnet, Tim. I hope your dreams do come true. Peace my friend:) Tim Smith February 27, 2016 at 8:15 PM Thanks Daniel...I do believe in dreams coming true so optimism is there.

Carl Fraser February 25, 2016 at 8:14 PM Hi Tim , you paint a very vivid image od your lady in blue in this piece. Hope that dream comes true for you. Blessings Carl Tim Smith February 27, 2016 at 8:13 PM Thank you Carl