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Lady In a Hat

LADY IN A HAT A buxom young lady called Pat Went out in the snow in a hat She turned blue, then went red When the officer said “You shouldn’t be wearing just that” 15th December 2021 I Need a Good Laugh: Xmas Limerick contest Sponsor - Andrea Dietrich

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/27/2021 4:05:00 AM

Wow! Great fun! Congratulations!

Eve Roper

Date: 12/26/2021 9:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your win , Brynm , great limerick . Hugs Eve

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/26/2021 1:54:00 PM

A wonderful limerick deserving of your podium win Bryn. I loved giggling over this one. Congratulations! Blessings xxoo

Brian Sambourne

Date: 12/25/2021 4:28:00 PM

Delightful! What a grand read. Congratulations! Brian

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/24/2021 7:47:00 PM

Lol! Bryn, This is hilarious! Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved. Have a good evening:-) Alexis

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/24/2021 6:38:00 PM

LOL…congrats!

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/24/2021 5:50:00 PM

Oh, this is hilarious, Bryn. Such a great limerick! Congratulations for your excellent win in Andrea’s contest. Warmest wishes for a merry Christmas.. ~Susan

Terry Flood

Date: 12/24/2021 4:28:00 PM

Just a couple of points we need to discuss, Bryn. Ha ha, fun Limerick, deserved win. Congrats. Terry

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/24/2021 4:16:00 PM

My, my, talk about courting frostbite! LOL! Big CONGRATS, Bryn. Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2021 4:04:00 PM

I abolutely loved this one, but please do me a favor, Bryn. You made a typo I think and forgot the word "be" in last line. Can you add that back in. The limerick beat and the humor are outstanding. You just left that one little word out or I'd have tied this with first place!! Congrats and merry Christmas.

Bryn Strudwick
Date: 1/1/2022 8:04:00 AM

Ah very observant Andrea. I never could proof-read my own work. My original draft did have the "be" in it. I'll update it. Generous of you not to penalise me for it! Happy New Year