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Ladies Swoon

Man does everything with a flair
Even the way he combs his hair
Always charming so debonair
Man does everything with a flair

Ladies swoon and faint away
A simple smile makes them sway
Bitten and smitten in every way
Ladies swoon and faint away

Man does everything with a flair
Feelings of love, of devil may care
But real men are just teddy bears
Man does everything with a flair

Ladies swoon and faint away
Cajoled, sweet talked to every day
Sometimes we lie, what can I say
Ladies swoon and faint away


© Jack Ellison 2013

Copyright © Jack Ellison | Year Posted 2013

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Timothy Hicks Date: 3/20/2013 10:46:00 AM "Sometimes we lie, what can I say?" << haha, Jack! It's in our nature isn't, eh? I don't think I've ever made and lady "swoon and faint away"... and if I did it wouldn't be out of charm but probably simply because I lifted up my arm a bit to close to their face, LOL! As for the form I believe this would be called a Monorhyme... seeing how your verses rhyme four times in a row. Btw I have sent you Soup Mail! Login to Reply Jack Ellison Date: 3/21/2013 8:05:00 AM If I had a dollar for every lady I've caused to swoon, I'd have at least a couple of dollars! LOL So it's called "Monorhyme"... makes sense!

Carol Eastman Date: 3/20/2013 7:35:00 AM I don't swoon... I just sigh... But if they lie I sic the Trolls on em... or the dragon... if he'll listen... probably not... quit pooping in my garden you silly dragon!... There go the Trolls... where you going? Doesn't any body listen? Sigh! See they did it... Those guys made me sigh.... LOL Login to Reply Jack Ellison Date: 3/21/2013 8:02:00 AM Pooping Trolls... yikes! Haven't you toilet trained them yet! LOL Hugs, The Jakester! xox

Russell Sivey Date: 3/20/2013 6:00:00 AM This is a wonderful write my friend! You have written a perfect poem about men and ladies, you have spent some time thinking on this subject haven't you? And it has paid off for you sure have the two of us pegged and portrayed to a 'T'! I loved reading this delightful poem completely Jack, what a masterful piece you have written! Awesome Work!! Login to Reply Jack Ellison Date: 3/21/2013 7:59:00 AM You are always so kind with your remarks! They are very much appreciated my good friend! Have a great day!