Ladies and Gentlemen, Hope Has Left the Building

We look at your life and don't think twice
You've got the best of all worlds
Then we hear, suicide 
And realize this isn't Disney World

Who knows the deep dark secrets
That each and everyone hides
Who's been promised this life but can't keep it
Turning off the switch before their time

Does hope never visit the hopeless 
Has it left with no forwarding address 
With those depressed would we know it
If we had to make a wild guess

The non suffering have no way of knowing
The darkness that invades the soul
A pain that's continually growing 
Until it takes full control

The world outside sees your love for this life
And never truly understands
As you struggle to find the thoughts in your mind say
Suicide is all you have left
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Hoffman Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 7:11 PM
I think suicidal people feel so overwhelmed that they feel the only remedy for their problems is to kill themselves...an awesome write Mike!~Che :)
Sands Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 1:20 PM
Well written Mike. Powerful poem !
Michael Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 12:50 PM
Who knows...why a bright light is suddenly switched off... it's a question mark in my mind...All the best Mike...a pertinent write...
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