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inspired by the contest here, laconic verse

Laconic Verse

from  the bottom of your heart,
mellowed by touch;
verses read from  your  eyes,
all is clear enough.










Nov. 29,2013          5.10am
By Leonora G.

First Place
Contest: Laconic Verse (old/new)
Judged: 12/29/13
Sponsor: Poet Giorgio Veneto

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Poet Destroyer A

January 4, 2014 at 7:58 PM

Hello Beautiful Blue Tulip, miss you already... :)... I'm still here. I got a few contest I have to move on too.... Thank you for thinking of me.. xox~ LINDA

Gautami Phookan

December 13, 2013 at 3:54 AM

That's so true. Laconic though , but a very lovely one! Enjoyed your write.. love, gautami

Bukang Liwayway

December 11, 2013 at 10:55 AM

very nice poem of yours my dear friend Leonora. I like it :) ;) ;) Have a nice day and thanks for everything. mwuah!!! ;)

Poet Destroyer A

December 8, 2013 at 10:09 PM

Stopping by this lovely verse again... I love how you used little ways in saying so much with just one look... Sending hugs and love.... forever your sis...LINDA

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

December 8, 2013 at 7:38 PM

An awesome verse, Leonora. How's been you and yours? Best wishes!

Andrea Dietrich

December 8, 2013 at 3:42 PM

Hi, sweet Leonora. How is the Xmas planning going this year? I hope you are having a great December and thanks for visiting my recent poetry.

Vincent Flannery

December 8, 2013 at 10:10 AM

So much said in so few words. What a beautiful verse. First time I read your work and look forward to reading more. Thank you for your kind comment. I have met so many special people on this site. Take care Leonora!

Poet. Undertaker

December 5, 2013 at 12:09 AM

eternal love so divine.awesome poem Leonora. (: ) Poet.Undertaker.

Poet Destroyer A

December 4, 2013 at 1:58 AM

hello, my sweet sis... haven't been active here over a week. However, I manage keeping myself updated with the new poets. miss you. I'm on vacation right now. headed to Oregon, almost in California:-) i will be back soon as we rest. .. sending hugs and love. ..bye for now my BFF...luv Linda

Len Gasun

December 4, 2013 at 8:13 AM

nice to hear from u my dearest sis. tcare always & enjoy ur vacation. biggest hugs!

Kelly Deschler

December 2, 2013 at 7:02 PM

All great poets write from their hearts, and you are one of them, Leonora! This is a very beautiful verse! Congratulations on your well deserved win!...Thank you so much for the wonderful congrats on my poem! I really do appreciate the fave! Hugs to you, my friend! :)

Donna Jones

December 1, 2013 at 7:04 PM

Leonora this is a magnificent poem....I see below congratulations are in order too...wow....faving also.

Charlotte Puddifoot

December 1, 2013 at 5:17 PM

this is a lovely little piece - congrats on your win in the contest :)

Richard Lamoureux

December 1, 2013 at 9:18 AM

I hope it is the beauty of your soul that you are witnessing through our eyes. Have a blessed day my friend. Hugs Rick.

Connie Marcum Wong

November 30, 2013 at 11:56 PM

Truly a beauty and deserving winning entry. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

November 30, 2013 at 9:44 PM

wow, Leonora, this was the perfect piece for this contest. Glad to see it at number one. BIG congrats, sweetie.

Juliet Ligon

November 30, 2013 at 6:37 PM

Congrats, Leonora!

Dr.Ram Mehta

November 29, 2013 at 5:07 AM

Congrats on the win, Leo

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 29, 2013 at 4:31 AM

... from my heart .... to your heart ..... ---> LOVE!! - So sweet Leonora! - Wish you a nice weekend. - HAPPY THANKSGIVING! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

November 28, 2013 at 11:27 PM

This is a perfect terse verse my friend! I really enjoyed reading this magnificent poem this evening! What a fantastic poem that you have written here, Great Work!!