Notes About The Poem

Lacking follow-through

Connection misfired not quite there.
Wanting actions to speak louder than words.
I expected more from you.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2026
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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De Beaulieu Avatar
January 23, 2026 at 12:14 PM
hello Lin, you sound disappointed. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 11:02 AM
hello Lin, yes it is that way sometimes. Hugs. /Darlene/
Gauthier Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 1:30 PM
lol ~ sometimes you win sometimes you lose.
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