Lace of Pearl

storm clouds melt on trees
leaning drenched on twilight gleam…
leaves weave lace of pearl

August 17, 2020
Syllables count : 5/7/5
Checked on howmaysyllables.com
Contest : Haiku-Nature Themed 2
Sponsor : Tania Kitchin
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Allison Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 5:20 PM
dropping back to say many congrats on your win Subimal:-) hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 8:30 PM
Congratulations on your win, Subimal, great imagery. Hugs Eve
Ermine Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 4:32 PM
I find your Haiku very strong, incredibly beautiful. An outstanding write on these 'little guys'. Congrats, Subimal. Fine work!!
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 1:31 PM
that last line is a stunning image. Congrats on the win
Kitchin Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 12:32 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely haiku!
Kauffman Avatar
August 22, 2020 at 12:11 PM
The calm after the storm so beautifully captured Sublimal! Congratulations on your winning placement!
Allison Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 4:45 AM
very pretty imagery:-) hugs Jan xx
Ranaweera  Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 3:58 AM
This is a wonderful write, Subimal!! So serene; so beautiful!!
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