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Lace And Candelabra

My thoughts now flicker shadowed walls
                      As lace through candelabra falls
Though littered in such sweet design
                    I’m comforted that they are mine

Through memories that plan ahead 
                          My mind erases what I dread
Replaced by scattered thoughts that dare
                          To linger as my feelings flare

So beautiful, this life I know
                    The summer sun, the fallen snow
As interwoven flashes form
                    I dance in time, so soft and warm

A blink of flying, island sleeps
              Those weddings, bidding joyful weeps
The Christmases and birthdays fair
                    My knowing you are always there

As thoughts still flicker fancy free
                             I worry not the state of me
A respite always finds my will
                  As rested as when time stands still

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Jan Allison

Date: 2/12/2024 12:28:00 AM

fee i wish i could write as beautifully as this Mike, the flow and imagery are amazing I especially love the third stanza and the title is just gorgeous! into my faves! hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/12/2024 3:47:00 AM

Jan, I am so flattered that it resonated with you, thank you so much xxoo

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 2/6/2024 8:58:00 AM

Such a beautiful poem, Mike. One filled with such magnificent imagery May your light always shine bright, my friend.

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/6/2024 12:49:00 PM

Thank you so much Jerry!!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/5/2024 10:22:00 AM

Deep thoughts filter through the candelabra. Emotions fly around and this makes a poem original.

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/6/2024 3:47:00 AM

Thank you Victor!!!

Charles Messina

Date: 2/3/2024 4:22:00 AM

A really nice write, Mike. "My mind erases what I dread." nice thoughts! Have a great weekend and stay well, my friend.

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/3/2024 5:42:00 AM

Thank you Charlie!!

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/2/2024 4:17:00 PM

Paul, Your poem is full of emotions, casting shadows that dance with the flicker of candlelight. Through your words, memories bloom like flowers in a garden, each petal adorned with delicate lace. Your ability to find comfort in the midst of life’s intricacies is truly inspiring. The imagery of summers and winters, weddings and birthdays, showing the richness of existence. It leaves us with a sense of peace and acceptance, a testament to the beauty of embracing the present moment. - Daniel

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/3/2024 5:42:00 AM

Thank you so much Daniel!!

Christina Bowring

Date: 2/1/2024 1:15:00 PM

Such a beautiful poem dear Mike with a great title too. Love the flow and brilliant rhymes as always from your gifted pen. The opening line is absolutely wonderful and draws the reader in immediately. Such well crafted reminiscing here with reflective thoughts that are touching and intimate for the reader to share. That last stanza is so poignant. A gentle, tender read from you. As Deb says - gorgeous! Thank you for sharing. :)) x

Mike Gentile
Date: 2/1/2024 6:29:00 PM

Christina, thank you so much for the lovely compliment, you are very kind with your words xxoo

Deb M

Date: 1/30/2024 12:41:00 PM

Another Mike Gentile classic beauty! The way you write Mike just tugs at the heartstrings…..gorgeous , gorgeous and gorgeous!! Debx

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/30/2024 2:11:00 PM

You are too kind to me Deb, thank you xxoo

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/29/2024 8:26:00 PM

You take the reader on an amazing journey Mike, both the hi's and the low's of your life. Hope your week is off to a good start. Tom

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/30/2024 4:11:00 AM

Thank you Tom and well wishes for a great week to you!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/29/2024 6:58:00 PM

'as lace through candelabra falls' --- voted best poetic line of January, 2024 by the 'Liberace-Liberated Candelabra Society of Underserved Pianists.' Quite an honor there, Mike. lol. ~ Paint 'Ed' Fingernails

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/30/2024 4:12:00 AM

Wow, so impressed here! Thanks GW, where is my plaque? Happy Tuesday!

Valsa George

Date: 1/29/2024 6:30:00 PM

I feel gliding through the flow of this poem. "The summer sun, the fallen snow As interwoven flashes form I dance in time, so soft and warm".... Love these lines. Here I sense the contentment of a heart, not over ambitious, but happy with the simple things of life. You don't wish to rush into activity, but enjoy the pause and lull of life. A smooth flowing, lovely poem dear Mike....

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/29/2024 6:44:00 PM

Thank you so much Valsa xxoo

Ink Empress

Date: 1/29/2024 10:09:00 AM

Dear Mike, your way with rhymes and phrasing thoughts is truly refreshing and so brilliant! I absolutely loved the flow and cadence of this, so captivatingly unique! I love especially the lines “ lace through candelabra falls“ “ The summer sun, the fallen snow As interwoven flashes form“ “ I dance in time, so soft and warm“ just love that! You are an amazing word weaver. Sending you light. Pleasure reading your work

Mike Gentile
Date: 1/29/2024 12:38:00 PM

Thank you so much, I am so flattered by your lovely compliment! Happy Monday Empress!!