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Labyrinthine

His mindfulness led me Through a labyrinthine maze Rambling sinuous thoughts Planted in thorny tangles A wandering elegance Baffling in its simplicity Mazelike in its meanderings A wise and twisting serpent Entangled in the complexities Of its naivety

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Date: 11/10/2023 1:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A powerful write. I really enjoyed it. Have a great day............
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Date: 11/4/2023 8:01:00 PM
You reminded me of Alzheimer and dementia, both very sad, like a labyrinthine of thoughts. Enjoyed reading my friend. Stay safe have a nice weekend.
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Date: 11/4/2023 2:32:00 PM
a well written Labyrinthine...a unique journey of mindfulness the narrator took, wandering elegance and mazelike meanderings. Beautiful imagery and alliteration. Nicely done, Sara
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