Labyrinth

yeah...dope! awesome write dear poet, likewise, i hope yuh mind not....thuh center'n and no punctuationz; love it sir ! now...did you know, you and i start'd on thuh soup thuh same star...dope...much love

Jim congratulations on your win in the contest. This is a superb poetic piece linking you to your ancestry, recognizing you share their blood and now see through their eyes. I love this. Congratulations!!! :)Paulette

I believe there is a connection between relations/ close friends that have passed, and the their loved ones that are left behind. My father 3 days after he died sent me a life saving message. I had a dream that I saw a billboard on the highway which was stark white, except for two words in black ink that stood out, TYRES SKID. My Uncle dashed out to see the tyres on my car, all 4 were entirely bald, which I had seen to the next day. Loved this form of poetry, never tried it. Blessings Jennifer

Beautiful.

Like Chris below, i too just browsing poets first, posted on here. love the philosophy here, Jimbo, enjoyed.

enjoyed greatly tonight, keep sharing!!

Interesting. Keep writing. Sara

what did you see???? ohhhhhh Iwant to go see that earthen snake thingie!http://www.sacred-destinations.com/usa/serpent-mound.htm

Have you been to Cahokia, site of a mound culture in the Miss. River valley? It's amazing! I have a poem about it but I can't remember the title..fret...nice one above! Light & Love

Super write James>>James

One must remember their ancestors. The foundation has been laid. Naturally, it's on the shoulders of this generation to guide it in the right direction. I really like this poem. If you would like to read some uplifting and inspirational pieces, check out my "2009 Best Christian Poetry Award" blog on site regarding my book. Great job and God bless always! ~Joseph

silk dreams - beautiful..

silk dreams...please write more..please "show" me a silk dream? Light & Love

Very ethereal write here, James ... my ancestors were liars and drunks so I'm not sure I want to join them ... smile ... then again, they might laud me for the cycles I've ceased ... Your writing is a well-deserved selection to be featured this week at the Soup. Congratulations!!

congrats on having your poem featured this week! keep up the good work!

congrats James on your idyll, "Labyrinth" being featured. Vince

This is wonderful writing. I like the spiritual undertone to this one. Sort of a chilling effect...Spirits of anestors speaking and teaching in ones dreams, I like that. Congratulations on being featured with this piece. Smiles from Lolita

Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Congratulations on your wonderful feature write! Kirstie

I love this...so beautifully written, and well deserving to be a featured write this week!! Glad I caught it here! ~Rather haunting, but lovely. Love, Carrie

Very nicely penned, outstanding write

Congrats onnhaving this piece featured well done

Congrats on the feature this week.

Truly beautiful poetry. Congratulations on your featured write of the week! Love, Shar

My brother Jim, I come to this gloriously by the invitation of your letter ... and I ask if we carry the legacy of its history must we too accept its destiny? If that destiny lies outside of the history I too will long for the vision. Good write! Love always