Etienne Lariviere Poet Free verse

La Naissance D'Un Autre Beau Dommage

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Hier, je suis tombé dans la noirceur de la nuit
Dans la mer de tristesse
Aujourd'hui je me lève de la mer
Seul dans le brouillard
Un autre poète est né

La naissance d'un autre Beau Dommage
 
Hier, je suis tombé dans la noirceur de la nuit
Dans une mer de tristesse
Aujourd'hui, je me relève et sors de la mer
Seul dans le brouillard
Un autre poète est né



Translation
 
Yesterday, I fell in the blackness of the night
Into the sea of sadness
Today I crawl out of the sea
Alone in the fog
Another poet is born

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Maurice Rigoler September 11, 2015 at 3:06 PM Etienne, merci d'avoir lu mon poème aujourd'hui. Je suis heureux que cela vous a fait rire. Meilleurs voeux. / M

Richard Lamoureux December 31, 2014 at 8:00 AM This brings to mind evolution. In a way our poetic awakening is an evolution of sorts. Etienne Lariviere January 9, 2015 at 1:32 PM If a poet can die, can not another poet be bornÉ

Brenda Meier-Hans December 6, 2014 at 2:46 PM I find this poem is brilliant. So is many a poet born. Etienne Lariviere December 7, 2014 at 2:58 PM Merci bien

Eve Roper December 6, 2014 at 1:18 PM Etienne, a very beautiful painting, Blessing to you Etienne Lariviere December 7, 2014 at 2:58 PM Thank you very much Eve

Jan Allison December 6, 2014 at 1:10 PM oh very deep and dark - I love the image you portrayed:-) Hugs jan xx Etienne Lariviere December 7, 2014 at 2:57 PM Merci Jan