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La Luna's Lure

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Luna’s lovely lyrics lure cosy chrysalis to start to hatch Finally free from captivity beautiful butterflies emerge Their fragile wings unfold and flutter I watch in wonderment as bright blue butterflies begin dancing to delightful disco music in the magical moonlight Gorgeous gossamer wings glisten and gleam like glitter in the sparkling silvery shafts of La Luna’s lambent light

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James Peranteau

Date: 1/4/2024 7:04:00 PM

i love writes which cauze mine dream dear poet ;) ty...much love, me

Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 12/31/2023 4:19:00 PM

Beautiful imagery and a delight to read. Smiles, Anne :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/25/2023 12:02:00 PM

So nice,my friend. Did you get my card yet? Merry Christmas, sweetie

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/21/2023 6:31:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write again. Love the picture. Merry Christmas..........

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 12/20/2023 4:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with such an enchanting poem - alliteration is perfect and marvellous!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 12/12/2023 12:43:00 PM

Such a wonderful Alliteration poem Jan, “Luna’s lovely lyrics lure” they certainly do…. Belle

Joseph May

Date: 12/10/2023 4:38:00 PM

An enchanting write Jan, best wishes

Tony Hargreaves

Date: 12/8/2023 11:07:00 AM

Hi Jan. Love this alliteration and images. 'Bright blue butterflies begin'. Now I look forward to the spring and life once more starts returning. Tony

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/5/2023 4:44:00 AM

Jan, I love your alliteration! Such beautiful images created here with masterful musing! I really enjoyed reading it this morning! I hope you have been well!! Happy Tuesday xxoo

Christina Bowring

Date: 12/2/2023 9:23:00 AM

Such an enchanting, beautifully exquisite poem dear Jan. Wonderful imagery enhanced even further with sublime alliteration. This piece is awe inspiring.So much to admire. Good luck in the contest. Hugs and smiles xx :):)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 11/29/2023 12:20:00 PM

Poem shows a nice contrast of the moon and butterflies.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/28/2023 11:40:00 PM

There's something magical about the moon, it's enchanting. I never get tired of gazing at it. Tom

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/28/2023 4:41:00 PM

soft, beautiful, and captivating images! I loved 'gorgeous gossamer wings' as well as your other alliterations. Stunning poetry...have to fave this one...have a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/28/2023 1:36:00 PM

What a lovely write/picture. Good Luck... Have a blessed day writing away.................