Jan Allison Poet Alliteration

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Contest Sponsor Anoucheka Gangabissoon 11/28/23

 

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La Luna's Lure

Luna’s lovely lyrics lure
cosy chrysalis to start to hatch

Finally free from captivity
beautiful butterflies emerge
Their fragile wings unfold and flutter
I watch in wonderment as
bright blue butterflies begin 
dancing to delightful disco music
in the magical moonlight

Gorgeous gossamer wings
glisten and gleam like glitter
in the sparkling silvery shafts
of La Luna’s lambent light

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James Peranteau January 4, 2024 at 7:04 PM i love writes which cauze mine dream dear poet ;) ty...much love, me

Anne E Sangster - K December 31, 2023 at 4:19 PM Beautiful imagery and a delight to read. Smiles, Anne :-)

Andrea Dietrich December 25, 2023 at 12:02 PM So nice,my friend. Did you get my card yet? Merry Christmas, sweetie

Paula Goldsmith December 21, 2023 at 6:31 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write again. Love the picture. Merry Christmas..........

Malabika Ray Choudhury December 20, 2023 at 4:47 PM Congratulations on your win with such an enchanting poem - alliteration is perfect and marvellous!

Beryl Edmonds December 12, 2023 at 12:43 PM Such a wonderful Alliteration poem Jan, “Luna’s lovely lyrics lure” they certainly do…. Belle

Joseph May December 10, 2023 at 4:38 PM An enchanting write Jan, best wishes

Tony Hargreaves December 8, 2023 at 11:07 AM Hi Jan. Love this alliteration and images. 'Bright blue butterflies begin'. Now I look forward to the spring and life once more starts returning. Tony

Mike Gentile December 5, 2023 at 4:44 AM Jan, I love your alliteration! Such beautiful images created here with masterful musing! I really enjoyed reading it this morning! I hope you have been well!! Happy Tuesday xxoo

Christina Bowring December 2, 2023 at 9:23 AM Such an enchanting, beautifully exquisite poem dear Jan. Wonderful imagery enhanced even further with sublime alliteration. This piece is awe inspiring.So much to admire. Good luck in the contest. Hugs and smiles xx :):)

Hilda Greenhough November 29, 2023 at 12:20 PM Poem shows a nice contrast of the moon and butterflies.

Tom Cunningham November 28, 2023 at 11:40 PM There's something magical about the moon, it's enchanting. I never get tired of gazing at it. Tom

Paula Goldsmith November 28, 2023 at 1:36 PM What a lovely write/picture. Good Luck... Have a blessed day writing away.................

Ilene Bauer November 28, 2023 at 12:14 PM this is the definition of "poetic," jan! very soft and absolutely lovely...

Eve Roper November 28, 2023 at 9:18 AM Great imagery of the butterfly in the moonlight. It reminds me of the moth that hover over the lights at night.

Daniel Turner November 28, 2023 at 8:40 AM This is wonderful, Jan. I like this one:)

Anne-Lise Andresen November 28, 2023 at 8:40 AM - A beautiful poem, Jan :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs