Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- La Luna Asoma -

The waves of the wake will shower
when daughters of the sea, shall arise
they meet the storm with important delivery
- the mermaid's egg

This birth is unique
The mermaids daughters of the Millennium
Soft under white foam and seaweed
among the many occurrences of the place
In melted silver and sparkling moon dust
- a safe universe for the newborn

A journey in waves,
that comes and goes,
like the ebb and flow
As the sea lifts a grain of sand, we salute
Love that gives new life
La luna asoma * - in the cradle of the sea







06.08.2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Devotion to Ocean Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke 
* "La luna asoma"  - When the Moon Rises

2nd place in the contest

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Kelly Deschler September 14, 2019 at 8:12 PM This wonderful poem was such a joy to read Anne-Lise ... Congratulations on your win as well! Anne-Lise Andresen September 15, 2019 at 6:08 AM - Thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Kelly :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jeanne Mcgee August 16, 2019 at 6:25 PM Ah...a lovely poem and wonderful imagery. Congrats on your win. Anne-Lise Andresen August 19, 2019 at 1:59 PM - Thanks for your kind visit and congratulations, Jeanne :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert L. Hinshaw August 16, 2019 at 2:43 PM Congratulations, Anne Lise for this beauty and the bella (Italian for beautiful) picture that accompanies it! I'm Honored to share 2d Place with you. Thanks for your kind comment re my win - Bob Anne-Lise Andresen August 19, 2019 at 1:58 PM - Ditto Bob, thanks for your kind visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Smith August 16, 2019 at 4:42 AM A lovely poem Anne-Lise, congrats. Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2019 at 7:42 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray August 16, 2019 at 3:54 AM A mythical, magical story of midwifery among mermaids. I LOVE it Anna- Lise. Well done on your placement. Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2019 at 7:41 AM - Many thanks, Jean ... always a pleasure to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper August 15, 2019 at 9:58 PM Wonderful write, Sunshine, congratulation on your wonderful win! Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2019 at 7:40 AM - Many thanks Eve, for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Debjani Mitra August 15, 2019 at 8:43 PM There is an ocean of romance in this lovely write Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2019 at 7:39 AM - Glad you liked it, thank you very much Debjani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong August 15, 2019 at 4:20 PM This is lovely Anne-Lise! Congratulations on your wonderful deserving podium win! : ) xxoo Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2019 at 7:39 AM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert L. Hinshaw August 9, 2019 at 1:20 PM A beautiful verse, Sunshine, and it is certain to be a top winner! Thank you so much for your kind comments re my entry in the contest. Always the best to you - Bob Anne-Lise Andresen August 10, 2019 at 12:20 PM - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, Bob :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alkas Poetry August 9, 2019 at 1:36 AM Splendid poem dear Anne-Lise ! Reading it and flying, superb ! congrats salute alkas Anne-Lise Andresen August 10, 2019 at 12:19 PM - Thank you very much, Alkas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior August 8, 2019 at 8:38 PM Well crafted dear Anne-Lise...an instant FAV!...best of luck for the contest...although ready for a win...^WW^ :o) Anne-Lise Andresen August 10, 2019 at 12:18 PM - Glad you liked it, thank you very much :) - And a special thank you for the fave, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos August 8, 2019 at 11:38 AM Stunning poetry dear soul sister - imagery dancing on every line - well penned. Hugs. Jennifer. Anne-Lise Andresen August 9, 2019 at 5:38 AM - Glad you liked it, thank you very much Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams August 7, 2019 at 2:30 PM your words are as magical as the mermaids of the sea...it flows beautifully, great penning Anne-Lise :) hugs Anne-Lise Andresen August 8, 2019 at 12:13 PM - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, Sandra :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ralph Sergi August 7, 2019 at 11:01 AM Hi Anne-Lise: A beautiful poetic description of the ocean! Anne-Lise Andresen August 7, 2019 at 1:45 PM - Thank you, Ralph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues August 7, 2019 at 10:52 AM A beautiful write! The image alongside your poem is divine. La luna asoma - the cradle of the sea, calls to us all! Anne-Lise Andresen August 7, 2019 at 1:45 PM - Glad you liked it, thank you very much Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux August 7, 2019 at 9:46 AM This washed over me with tides of beauty. Anne-Lise Andresen August 7, 2019 at 1:44 PM - Thank you, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman August 6, 2019 at 7:53 PM Beautiful imagery, Anne-Lise! Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Kim Anne-Lise Andresen August 7, 2019 at 5:16 AM - A little fairytale from the sea, Kim :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis August 6, 2019 at 4:55 PM "Sparkling moon" poetry that fills the heart with magical beauty dearest, Anne-Lise! What an ethereal verse my friend! Good luck! Hugs xxx Anne-Lise Andresen August 7, 2019 at 5:14 AM - Glad you liked it, thank you very much Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison August 6, 2019 at 4:48 PM This is absolutely delightful imagery Anne-Lise I am so behind at the moment not had time to see the contests:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen August 7, 2019 at 5:13 AM - ... many contest Jan, I can not manage to write for all :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit August 6, 2019 at 2:09 PM A charming poem Anne-Lise..kudos for the imagination and creativity..all the best. Anne-Lise Andresen August 7, 2019 at 5:11 AM - Many thanks, Vijay ... a pleasure to share :) ... fun to write :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)