L O V E

L- Lost in you, and lost in nothing but youre eyes.
O- outside, and inside i can see through youre soul.
V- Validateing and breathing in youre heartbeat as it sinks into the rythum of mine.
E- Elivateting the sound, and the rythum of youre love, and i put my patterns at youres, 
becoming all but one. This Exciting  love that now what i can never forget the Envirormental 
and Eprehensive Expermental love, that is now mine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Falotico Avatar
August 11, 2010 at 2:44 PM
Very good write!!! Here are 2 of mine you might like. "The sun Inside" & "Just Me and You" search my name and you should find them. Love your thoughts on them...Luv Michael
Kendrick Avatar
June 10, 2010 at 9:20 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned.Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 12:45 PM
Welcome to the Soup Family... enjoyed your creative write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Brown Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 5:49 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Miranda. Excellent Acrostic. Love, Carol
Spence Sr Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 5:21 PM
I like this acrostic and the essence of the subject. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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