Kuhio Street At 5am

I am sitting here on Kuhio Street
with the old Honolulu blues again.
The early day shift's coming on their beat
in the midst of the breezy, pre-dawn game,
where the last of the midnight street life girls
and their pimps argue at Jack in the Box,
and hotel crews, aloha shirts and curls,
grab a cup on their way to cope with lots
of tourists immune to all history
of this port. The last black stretch limousine
from the night heads home and the touristy
families stumble from hotel "da kine"
to Hawaiian holiday on remains
of a past era's colonized domains.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Jones Avatar
July 22, 2008 at 7:25 PM
I remember good old Kuhio street. I lived right off it for years. I remember when they ordered the hookers over to Kuhio from Kalakaua street back in the late 70s or early 80s. I haven't been back there much since 88, when I moved to my new island in the middle of the Puget Sound, north of Seattle. I prefer this island. I always hated the racist locals that hated me, a howlie. Great poem, I can visualize and remember it all like yesterday, a friggin nightmare. Great poem ~Peace~Gar
Bellefleur Avatar
July 22, 2008 at 7:49 AM
I can relate to this having been to Hawaii - but what is "da kine" - we have been trying to figure it out after passing by 'Dog's" place of business. Well done..
Brown Avatar
July 22, 2008 at 5:49 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Ahellas. Love, Carol
Jordan Avatar
July 21, 2008 at 11:18 AM
A real life poem from a place sought to escape life and all its problems - Congrats on the feature
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
July 21, 2008 at 8:23 AM
True to life write. I didn't know there were any Jack in the Boxes left. They were growing mainland then disappeared. Congratulations on your poem being featured. Vince
Winter Avatar
July 20, 2008 at 5:36 PM
Congratulations Ahellas on your featured write of the week. Love, Shar
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