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Known As Dawn

*:**:**:**;**:** this shining burst strokes early day’s first shade illumination flashing all corners of galaxy’s face and this my name was marked in womb’s white lace~~ upon Dad’s request ,as training general abroad, was made it was Mom’s first time to bear middle- child without Dad around all present christened me many names for fond memories~~ in the end, i had four titles, certificate’s page singing melodies Amelia for mother’s, one that’s Grandma’s ~~others subtlety profound Dad’s desire that real name come from district he was assigned the meaning “goddess of light”~~first morn’s crocheted shawl~~ an image painting streaks of first daybreak’s gold, brushed wall~ that it was loved by kin, a symbol stamped in family’s history designed still, more terms of endearment were showered upon me the nickname” Nette” and more always drifted back and forth tenderly~~ yet, it was an abbreviated moniker plucked from late 60’s modernity for i have come to be me ,fondly known as such~~ a gypsy so free intimate souls affix real name with tender variants dearly strewn ~~ they cherish essence of its meaning, such presence like blooming light my being’s shades of nitrogen green and gold gush even at night’s delight if you can second guess the enchantment of my name, it’s almost… “DAWN” ************************* (( for Linda Marie's " What’s In A Name Contest" ))

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Date: 3/5/2011 6:08:00 AM
Hey nette,congrats on your 2nd place win with this wonderful poem!an ever rising winning graph!!--kashinath
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Date: 3/4/2011 4:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/4/2011 12:04:00 AM
I like this beautiful name Nette more than priya. many warm congrats for this win.
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Date: 3/3/2011 3:39:00 PM
Not at all surprised to see this win!! Congrats, Nette on this 'dawning' story of your name!
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Date: 3/3/2011 1:34:00 PM
Lovely description of your name, Nette. Glad to see it here at second place and finally read it!! Some girls are simply named Dawn and that is really pretty too!
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Date: 3/3/2011 12:01:00 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Linda, nette
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Date: 3/3/2011 9:44:00 AM
Dawn is my youngest daughter's middle name, congrats on your second place win in the contest with this wonderful entry
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Date: 3/3/2011 9:23:00 AM
Congrats Nette on your second place win in my What's in a Name contest with this superb entry luv.. thankxx for your wonderful support always...
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Date: 2/22/2011 1:31:00 AM
Wow! Your name means all that? Elegant, You will do well in this contest!
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Date: 2/20/2011 7:29:00 PM
lovely use of imagery
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Date: 2/20/2011 4:45:00 PM
Good one..Enjoyed learning a little about your name..Good luck in the contest..Reads like winning material to me.Thanks for your kind review of my work...Sara
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Date: 2/20/2011 12:12:00 PM
How interesting that you were given the beautiful name "Dawn" at birth, Nette. I thought perhaps "Nette" was short for Anette. Do you mind if I think of you as Dawn emerging on a cloud? Nette Onclaud has such a lilt to it! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/20/2011 11:41:00 AM
An amazing write !Glad to know the history and meaning of your name.Goodluck in the contest(:SM:)
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Date: 2/20/2011 11:38:00 AM
thankxx Nette for supporting my current contest ..good luck .. will read fully as judging draws closer so as to enjoy .. I know I shall be mesmerized by your fascinating words luv..
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Date: 2/20/2011 8:28:00 AM
Decent descriptiveness and rhyming in a nice to read writing.
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Date: 2/20/2011 7:59:00 AM
Wow....just lovely is this explanation of your name....each part of your name is lovely, Amelia-Nette-Dawn....how to choose between them? Impossible to find a favorite!!
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Date: 2/20/2011 7:45:00 AM
Hi Nette :) It's so interesting how you were named, story behind your name is so nice and how cool is that? your name has similarities to light-- can I hazard a guess and say one of your 4 (wow 4 names!!) is Aurora? you sure got me thinking with this-- enjoyed reading this :) & yup I agree with Michael --seems like it would do well :) hugs :)
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Date: 2/20/2011 6:55:00 AM
Very good Nette, Dawn is also a very nice name..Your poetry should do well in Linda's contest... a true Beauty..luv Michael
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