Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

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i wrote this after talking to a few friends on facebook inspired this after so many losses of innocent life where in my prayers every life is precious this last few days going on human violations ignored why  we see the writing on the wall and hide not me i speak it how it is in my mind 

Knowing Right From Wrong

It's the pain laced cold reality check
crashing winds hurricane blowing 
the tail end landing with news processed 

Suffering human rights ignored pains
through prides green eyes 
a legion filled with envy
money signs the pact

Your a joke monster of a devil 
whom mocks and violates this earthly gift 
who armed Isis

Or any other of these so called rebel groups 
world terrorists are to blame bullies
for such deadly sins taking life's of your fathers sons

They will curse you 
to hell and back forever 
the damned armed 
with the devils tools 
destruction of humanity creeps closer 

Crawling dark matter
from the dirty underworld 
dead bones rise
scattering ash burns to dust 

Blood of our brothers and sisters spill 
upon grounds seeking peace 
sins with their poisonous greed
Oil is now the dark matter reaping souls 
without Divine mercy kills with hate 

His judgement comes on the final day 
they hide in the mountains of who they are
Claiming to be something 
they are not humane 
begs the question inside truth 

World dominating powers invade
with bombs to dominate and destroy a world's grace 
Doomsday is there no end 
to your horrid need for suffering
 
Your games Satan faceless entity 
hiding in the shadows 
a snake turns against God's seals 
without spine dark matter
Think human morals out seriously 

They have gone upside down deciding fate 
our future generations life children cry
in the drop of a hat inside core

Out of this world 
tilting balance towards revelations 
trial of life 
we see answers unfolding 
blinded no more by falseness
good against evil begins the battle

I believe in faith 
a great source 
holding power over hate 
so my prayers are for peace 
dove of an angel sings the joy 
with love and understanding 
the book of good conduct 
God blesses all those afflicted deeply

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Ravi Sathasivam November 17, 2015 at 10:45 PM Excellent and lovely dedication. Heartfelt write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Anita Sharma November 17, 2015 at 1:24 PM excellent

Anita Sharma November 17, 2015 at 1:23 PM such a excellent write loved and liked

Gary Bateman November 17, 2015 at 8:58 AM Hello Liam Mate!! The passion and power of your most outstanding write here, "Knowing Right From Wrong," certainly rings loud and true. ISIS, and everything they stand for and the people who follow them, are the SCUM OF THIS EARTH!! The struggle of Good and Evil is on ample display for all of us to see. Brilliant Work my great friend!! May God Bless You!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Arthur Vaso November 16, 2015 at 9:14 PM Wow, now what a lovely dedication tiss is.

Dorian Petersen Potter November 15, 2015 at 7:02 PM Hi Liam!A very outstanding n' most powerful heartfelt poem,you've written here my dearest friend,Liam.Very sad but very beautifully written with lots of deep caring, compassion understanding about all.Yes,what happened in Paris is a very horrible tragedy,Liam.My heart n' soul are very heavy n' I'm crying alot , for all these barbaric n senseless killings.Very sad n' we need pray a lot for the whole world, Liam.I know you have a very beautiful heart n soul Liam, a heart of pure gold n' I'm sure you deeply feel n' care for all this.Thank you so much for caring alot, n' writing this very beautiful piece,Liam.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden pen!Excellent tribute!Awesome.Superb!I love it!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.I really hope you're doing okay.Always keeping you in my prayers!Keep your Faith!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^