Know Your Rights

Outside the pearly gates
a billionaire is refused entry by St Peter

Why am I not allowed in 

You already had a lifetime of heaven 
whilst others lived in hell

Yes I did have a fantastic heavenly life 
what difference does that make 
Just how many times can you be in heaven 

Only once it’s a permanent state of bliss

So what’s the problem 

Hmm I see your point, ok go ahead 
it’s all discretionary anyway 
Penthouse suite do

is it overlooked

Next!

Poor wretch behind was listening 

St Peter says so you’ve had a life of hell

Actually no wasn’t quite as bad as hell!

By
David Kavanagh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Allison Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 1:40 PM
ha ha ha great one, all I know where I am going will be hot as I'm being cremated lol:-) hugs jan xx
Kavanagh  Avatar
February 9, 2021 at 1:59 PM
I’m sort of leaning towards cremation myself Jan, I just hope if I’m to be judged they have a sense of humor, cheers David
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