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Slightly sunny, yet cold Still writing, scribbling down useless droll Hears strumming of guitar Sighs and looks out the window shyly Emeraldo there, like a burn in dawn The buildings floating above the pavement Stares at him…lustfully…in awe Emeraldo looks up suddenly at form Quickly looks away and closes the curtain ... He will never know No, he will never Know

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/17/2012 9:16:00 AM
Smile ˜ Good Morning, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Laura * Quite Intriguing This Verse In Abstract, Although, Lovely Its Potential Muse * Whom Can Venture As To Say What Shall Truly Be, Upon The End Of Another Or Even Ones Day? * I Carry Not That Thought; Making My Way Unto The Majestic Gates * Thank You For Your Kind Visit & Keep Brushing Your Precious Heart's Hues * My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜
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Date: 5/4/2012 1:52:00 PM
A very nice expressed story poem, I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Date: 5/1/2012 8:07:00 AM
Very sweet, Laura. You have interesting ideas to package your words. Excellent!
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Date: 4/29/2012 3:43:00 AM
NICE!!
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Date: 4/22/2012 3:50:00 AM
Wonderful Laura, this is a beautiful poem. harry
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Date: 4/19/2012 1:40:00 PM
The sun is shining bright here this afternoon in Ohio and I am enjoying reading some very interesting and outstanding writing. So happy to see yours among the ones I am able to read this fine day before I get busy. Have a wonderful day and thank you so much for sharing your poetry with us Laura. Love, Carol
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