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Knotty Tryst

Rolling in Meadows in her hair A tango mass of Butterflies And what knots Roped in Tongue tied With a pollen smeared smile Smack smitten by every cinch 8/22/2019 Wow Me Poetry Contest Sponsored by Nina Parmenter

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Date: 8/30/2019 8:39:00 AM
Perfect word choices in this one Maureen. Justified applause!
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 8/30/2019 9:35:00 AM
Thank you my friend :))) xomo!
Date: 8/28/2019 10:45:00 AM
I love it! Congratulations!
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 8/29/2019 9:33:00 AM
Thank you Anna! xomo :)))
Date: 8/26/2019 9:05:00 PM
Glad to see this made the winners list.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 8/29/2019 9:34:00 AM
Thank you Rick! xomo <3
Date: 8/26/2019 5:19:00 PM
WOW in every crafted line.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 8/29/2019 9:35:00 AM
Thank you Georgia! :))) xomo!
Date: 8/26/2019 4:22:00 PM
The English language is your playground! properly wowed! Congratulations!
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 8/29/2019 9:36:00 AM
Thank you so much P.S.! xomo :)))
Date: 8/26/2019 2:02:00 PM
back to say congrats on your win :) hugs
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 8/29/2019 9:45:00 AM
Thank you Sandy! xomo :)
Date: 8/26/2019 11:31:00 AM
Mo congrats on your wow factor!;)
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 8/29/2019 9:46:00 AM
Thank you Brenda! xomo <3
Date: 8/25/2019 10:35:00 PM
Very nice, Maureen - best wishes!
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 8/26/2019 9:19:00 AM
Thank you Greg! xomo <3
Date: 8/25/2019 4:04:00 PM
Maureen, Shadows of ancient word flavors, mixed with angst, in all their anachronistic glory. -Richard
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Quoth TheRaven
Date: 8/26/2019 11:13:00 AM
Perhaps too much curry? The cap came loose, I swear. -R
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 8/25/2019 5:27:00 PM
Thank you Richard, I am thrilled by your insight. Still digesting :) xomo!
Date: 8/24/2019 3:58:00 PM
This iS a great example is showing, not telling... Great modern poetry...
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 8/25/2019 9:55:00 AM
Thank you my friend!! <3 xomo!
Date: 8/24/2019 12:48:00 AM
A fun lay on words, good luck in the contest. hugs Rick.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 8/24/2019 7:54:00 AM
Giggles! ;), Thank you Richard! xomo
Date: 8/23/2019 8:55:00 PM
great word choices to make the images really pop...it has the wow factor to me, love it...good luck in the contest! :) hugs
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 8/24/2019 7:54:00 AM
I tried ;), Thank you Sandra! xomo :)))
Date: 8/23/2019 3:38:00 PM
You certainly have a way with words my dear poet! You are an original and a breath of fresh air! Never stop! A fav for me!
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 8/24/2019 7:50:00 AM
Wow, thank you! <3 <3 <3 xomo!
Date: 8/23/2019 2:45:00 PM
Sexy, flirtatious, very alluring; nice one.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 8/24/2019 7:45:00 AM
Thank you Lawrence! xomo!
Date: 8/23/2019 8:48:00 AM
This was amazing Mo! Good luck in the contest!;) reads like a winner to me!;)
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 8/23/2019 1:53:00 PM
Thank you Brenda! :))) xomo!
Date: 8/23/2019 8:13:00 AM
Hi Maureen, your word choices here are diamonds picked from coals. Every line pops with its own enigmatic colors. Most excellent!
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 8/23/2019 1:52:00 PM
Thank you Eric! I pulled out all the stops for this one, aiming for the "wow" ;), xomo
Date: 8/23/2019 7:39:00 AM
I think I am tangled up in this wonderful poetic entry. Best wishes in the contest.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 8/23/2019 7:45:00 AM
Hugs and giggles and Thank You! xomo :),
Date: 8/23/2019 5:02:00 AM
"And what knots" I'm tangled up in your smile...
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 8/23/2019 7:44:00 AM
:)))))))))))))))))) ! <3
Date: 8/23/2019 2:12:00 AM
This one grabbed me, rolled me, threw me into a batch of butterflies, and kicked me down the hill with pure magic. Nice does not begin to say how I feel about this one.
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 8/23/2019 7:43:00 AM
Huzzah! Exactly what I was hoping for! ;D, Hopefully Nina falls for it too! xomo!
Date: 8/22/2019 7:53:00 PM
Wow oh my oh my Maureen. I mean I've been babbling in my past 20 some poems, and you tied everything up in a few simple words. This is a great poem!!!
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 8/23/2019 10:47:00 PM
This truly tickled my fancy. It's a dandy Maureen!!!
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Maureen McGreavy
Date: 8/23/2019 7:40:00 AM
My muse tickling me well with this one. Coochie coo. Hope it tickles the sponsor too... Thank you my friend! xomo :)))