Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Poet Free verse

Knotty Tryst

Rolling in
Meadows in her hair
A tango mass of
Butterflies
And what knots

Roped in

Tongue tied

With a pollen smeared smile
Smack smitten by every cinch





8/22/2019

Wow Me Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Nina Parmenter

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Eric Ashford August 30, 2019 at 8:39 AM Perfect word choices in this one Maureen. Justified applause! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 30, 2019 at 9:35 AM Thank you my friend :))) xomo!

Anna Hopper August 28, 2019 at 10:45 AM I love it! Congratulations! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 29, 2019 at 9:33 AM Thank you Anna! xomo :)))

Richard Lamoureux August 26, 2019 at 9:05 PM Glad to see this made the winners list. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 29, 2019 at 9:34 AM Thank you Rick! xomo <3

Georgia Kereopa August 26, 2019 at 5:19 PM WOW in every crafted line. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 29, 2019 at 9:35 AM Thank you Georgia! :))) xomo!

P.S. Awtry August 26, 2019 at 4:22 PM The English language is your playground! properly wowed! Congratulations! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 29, 2019 at 9:36 AM Thank you so much P.S.! xomo :)))

Sandra Adams August 26, 2019 at 2:02 PM back to say congrats on your win :) hugs Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 29, 2019 at 9:45 AM Thank you Sandy! xomo :)

Brenda Chiri August 26, 2019 at 11:31 AM Mo congrats on your wow factor!;) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 29, 2019 at 9:46 AM Thank you Brenda! xomo <3

Gregory Richard Barden August 25, 2019 at 10:35 PM Very nice, Maureen - best wishes! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 26, 2019 at 9:19 AM Thank you Greg! xomo <3

Quoth Theraven August 25, 2019 at 4:04 PM Maureen, Shadows of ancient word flavors, mixed with angst, in all their anachronistic glory. -Richard Quoth Theraven August 26, 2019 at 11:13 AM Perhaps too much curry? The cap came loose, I swear. -R Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 25, 2019 at 5:27 PM Thank you Richard, I am thrilled by your insight. Still digesting :) xomo!

Silent One August 24, 2019 at 3:58 PM This iS a great example is showing, not telling... Great modern poetry... Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 25, 2019 at 9:55 AM Thank you my friend!! <3 xomo!

Richard Lamoureux August 24, 2019 at 12:48 AM A fun lay on words, good luck in the contest. hugs Rick. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 24, 2019 at 7:54 AM Giggles! ;), Thank you Richard! xomo

Sandra Adams August 23, 2019 at 8:55 PM great word choices to make the images really pop...it has the wow factor to me, love it...good luck in the contest! :) hugs Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 24, 2019 at 7:54 AM I tried ;), Thank you Sandra! xomo :)))

Wren Rushing August 23, 2019 at 3:38 PM You certainly have a way with words my dear poet! You are an original and a breath of fresh air! Never stop! A fav for me! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 24, 2019 at 7:50 AM Wow, thank you! <3 <3 <3 xomo!

Lawrence Sharp August 23, 2019 at 2:45 PM Sexy, flirtatious, very alluring; nice one. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 24, 2019 at 7:45 AM Thank you Lawrence! xomo!

Brenda Chiri August 23, 2019 at 8:48 AM This was amazing Mo! Good luck in the contest!;) reads like a winner to me!;) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 23, 2019 at 1:53 PM Thank you Brenda! :))) xomo!

Eric Ashford August 23, 2019 at 8:13 AM Hi Maureen, your word choices here are diamonds picked from coals. Every line pops with its own enigmatic colors. Most excellent! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 23, 2019 at 1:52 PM Thank you Eric! I pulled out all the stops for this one, aiming for the "wow" ;), xomo

Chris Green August 23, 2019 at 7:39 AM I think I am tangled up in this wonderful poetic entry. Best wishes in the contest. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 23, 2019 at 7:45 AM Hugs and giggles and Thank You! xomo :),

Arturo Michael August 23, 2019 at 5:02 AM "And what knots" I'm tangled up in your smile... Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 23, 2019 at 7:44 AM :)))))))))))))))))) ! <3

Caren Krutsinger August 23, 2019 at 2:12 AM This one grabbed me, rolled me, threw me into a batch of butterflies, and kicked me down the hill with pure magic. Nice does not begin to say how I feel about this one. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 23, 2019 at 7:43 AM Huzzah! Exactly what I was hoping for! ;D, Hopefully Nina falls for it too! xomo!

Jeff Connelly August 22, 2019 at 7:53 PM Wow oh my oh my Maureen. I mean I've been babbling in my past 20 some poems, and you tied everything up in a few simple words. This is a great poem!!! Jeff Connelly August 23, 2019 at 10:47 PM This truly tickled my fancy. It's a dandy Maureen!!! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 23, 2019 at 7:40 AM My muse tickling me well with this one. Coochie coo. Hope it tickles the sponsor too... Thank you my friend! xomo :)))