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Knotty

A knotty path, woven in twine With twists and turns like frizzy vine With ups and downs and rugged plains With teary tales and bloody stains Above and below knots of square Are damages one can't repair For they're engraved in hearts of stone And their hellhole reaches the bone But time is kind for those who wait For those who love and shun the hate For those who tie down their burden On the waiting halls of heaven For time will come when chains will break Knots will loosen for goodness sake The knotty path will soon unfold The sky will clear as it was told Keep, knock, knotty poetry contest 2nd place

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Date: 10/29/2023 6:16:00 PM
Engaging poem. Enjoyed the message and rhyme.
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 10/29/2023 7:07:00 PM
Thank you very much...
Date: 10/29/2023 5:57:00 PM
Wonderful. God bless you. love, Gina
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R. B. Cawis
Date: 10/29/2023 6:00:00 PM
Thank you very much... I want to go back to making more poems like this, with sunshines in the end...

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