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Knotty

I cannot just confront the spider web It sticks to my face wherever I go Like the physique-psyche entangling ebb Uncertainty, in each vein, seems to flow Muscle knot happens; so too do vein knots Isn't Kith and Kin link-line a we too? There are knots amidst showy flower pots Doesn't the relationships seem to woe? I say to my children to be careful Life, indeed, is a web, so enticing Good and bad walk together to fulfill I feel, as though, O......... my heart is slicing Knot your relationships, I say, people Our life and hope is like a church steeple

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Date: 10/30/2023 1:36:00 PM
a lovely take on the prompt. Your poem contains some wisdom wrapped within the spider and spider web metaphor. Best wishes for the contest, Sara...have a splendid day too
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/30/2023 8:52:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 10/30/2023 12:41:00 AM
Life indeed is a web i agree, good and bad knotted together, one must learn to be cautious as not everything that shimmers is gold! Beautiful take on this prompt and i love the way you’ve phrased your thoughts in such a creative manner! Profound! And very impressive! With so much depth! Pleasure reading this! Sending you light always
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 10/30/2023 8:51:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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