Knotted - Pleiades

Kindled love, promises - 
keepsake blue in her dress,
kindest heart in his chest.
Kapoks sway in soft breeze.
Kindred souls wed beneath.
Knowing joy, lives unite,
kissed lips seal - man and wife!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Pett Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 4:12 AM
Congratulations Rhonda, lovely Pleiades, Well deserved win, :)
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 4:04 AM
- Congratulations on your great Pleiades 'K' poems, Rhonda :) - Best wishes for a lovely Tuesday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krampe Avatar
March 13, 2017 at 4:50 PM
Congrats on your win, Rhonda.
Merryman Avatar
March 13, 2017 at 4:45 PM
You painted a vivid portrait with your Pleiades, Rhonda! I like how you used a marriage ceremony to depict "knotted" Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, Kim
Yvonne Avatar
March 13, 2017 at 2:08 PM
Love this Pleiades. A complex form handled with ease. A huge fav.
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