Knots

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like handworking lace commentary intricate i mourn at its loss i cannot recover knots the antique roses undone 5/16/2023

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/20/2023 4:39:00 AM

Yes, we have lost the grip on conversation. Text, email, and short notes have replaced the sharing of ourselves with another. Thanks for sharing this one with us. I hope that is what this one is about. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2023 8:44:00 AM

I’d say that you came the closest, Sara. I love everyone’s take on it though.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/18/2023 3:52:00 PM

Great art in your tanka, dear

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/18/2023 3:55:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/18/2023 6:21:00 AM

Hello Kim, all roses must bud bloom and die.' Its just the way life jouney lies.. Like the knots we untangle On a yacht, or pot-holing rope dangles.' Such reality's are ours to come by.' Enjoyed this write..'

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/18/2023 2:48:00 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/16/2023 6:51:00 PM

'The Art' of Mourning. Profound penning, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2023 8:09:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/16/2023 12:00:00 PM

Splendid picture of entwined roses. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2023 4:36:00 PM

Thank you, my frIend!