Knolls

Kindling a balmy flame

Knolls lovely on both banks

Key to the cure of my

Knee pain, as the river

Knocks on the door inside

Knots dissolve in orange

Kneel I reflexively
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 March 10, 2017 for Pleiades K Contest of Kim Merryman

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Paul Callus

March 14, 2017 at 10:24 AM

Congratulations for winning, Probir, but even more for the originality of the chosen theme as well as its deliverance. I'll have to acquire some of this balm with healing powers! Regards // paul

Probir Gupta

March 15, 2017 at 12:01 AM

Sure, Paul ... Haven't we all, you and me, she and he, grown up in the care of the balm? ... Thank you ... Regards ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 14, 2017 at 4:19 AM

- Congratulations on your great Pleiades 'K' poems, Probir :) - Best wishes for a lovely Tuesday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta

March 14, 2017 at 7:21 AM

Thank you so much, Anne ...

Agnes Krampe

March 13, 2017 at 10:55 PM

Congrats on your placement, Probir. Your poem is unique and deep, and I will have to read it a few times :)

Probir Gupta

March 13, 2017 at 11:09 PM

I am glad seeing you like this poem ... A sensitive reader's imagination and understanding contribute to opening new windows in a poem, end especially in Pleiades and Haiku ... In my view our world would have been devoid of beauty without the knolls ... Thank you ...

Kim Merryman

March 13, 2017 at 5:40 PM

A creatively written Pleiades, Probir! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Probir Gupta

March 13, 2017 at 11:03 PM

Thank you very much, Kim for sponsoring the contest and considering my poem for placement ... Composing Pleiades is a nice game of intellect ...

Arthur Vaso

March 11, 2017 at 6:44 PM

This was very creative and original, enjoyed!

Probir Gupta

March 11, 2017 at 7:30 PM

You are the first visitor to detect what there is between the lines ... I feel the beauty of a poem lies in what it doesn't say than what it says ... In its multiple suggestions ... Thank you, Arthur ...