Knolls

Kindling a balmy flame

Knolls lovely on both banks

Key to the cure of my

Knee pain, as the river

Knocks on the door inside

Knots dissolve in orange

Kneel I reflexively
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 March 10, 2017 for Pleiades K Contest of Kim Merryman

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Paul Callus

Date: 3/14/2017 10:24:00 AM

Congratulations for winning, Probir, but even more for the originality of the chosen theme as well as its deliverance. I'll have to acquire some of this balm with healing powers! Regards // paul

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/15/2017 12:01:00 AM

Sure, Paul ... Haven't we all, you and me, she and he, grown up in the care of the balm? ... Thank you ... Regards ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/14/2017 4:19:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great Pleiades 'K' poems, Probir :) - Best wishes for a lovely Tuesday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/14/2017 7:21:00 AM

Thank you so much, Anne ...

Agnes Krampe

Date: 3/13/2017 10:55:00 PM

Congrats on your placement, Probir. Your poem is unique and deep, and I will have to read it a few times :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/13/2017 11:09:00 PM

I am glad seeing you like this poem ... A sensitive reader's imagination and understanding contribute to opening new windows in a poem, end especially in Pleiades and Haiku ... In my view our world would have been devoid of beauty without the knolls ... Thank you ...

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/13/2017 5:40:00 PM

A creatively written Pleiades, Probir! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/13/2017 11:03:00 PM

Thank you very much, Kim for sponsoring the contest and considering my poem for placement ... Composing Pleiades is a nice game of intellect ...

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/11/2017 6:44:00 PM

This was very creative and original, enjoyed!

Probir Gupta
Date: 3/11/2017 7:30:00 PM

You are the first visitor to detect what there is between the lines ... I feel the beauty of a poem lies in what it doesn't say than what it says ... In its multiple suggestions ... Thank you, Arthur ...