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Knocked Off My Feet

You shared a piece of you with me
Showed me your life in pictures
A glimpse inside you let me see
Now you and I are fixtures
In the world of happy lovers
Oh so joyful and content
Above the bird of paradise hovers
Could it be you're heaven-sent?

You are the light of day my sweet
And evenings tranquility
Knocked so gratefully off my feet
This blind woman now will see
The merit of giving up your heart
For a lifetime wrapped in bliss
Loving you right from the start
Burning me with your kiss

Let the journey truly begin
Travel with me to a far off place
Where the sun bronzes our skin
And sand sparkles your face
We can make a home anywhere
A love nest built for two
When you wake up you'll find me there
Your whole lifetime through

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/16/2011 9:40:00 AM
What rhyming! You have a very admirable offering here.
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Date: 1/15/2011 11:20:00 AM
wow!this one did it for me. all my defences down i totally surender. or to steal a phrase, you knocked me off my feet. i wish it were me you were talking to i like being sweet talked by a woman. and these words will take me a long way. to the war and back. thank you for the feelings. T. S.
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Date: 1/14/2011 2:56:00 PM
And what beautiful write that knocks me off my feet!!! A lucky man has your heart... bless him and you... Love Michael
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Date: 1/14/2011 12:30:00 PM
I am so happy to feel good enough to be reading poetry today. It was a pleasure to read your amazing write today Deb . Love, Carol
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