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Knight Rises

He rides towards the setting sun Further and further from his special one The sound of his armor clanking with each hoof beat Perspiration horse and rider oppressive desert heat He rides through the desert to find the Prince. Commissioned by the King to bring him home. All others afraid he rides alone. He will not stop until he fulfills this pact. His spirit is strong he chooses to act. The King makes a promise, "Brave Knight, bring my son home, you can have anything, a castle of stone." Knight responds, " I will do what you ask. I will not stop Until I complete the task. Allow me to make but one request, to marry your daughter Jessica when I pass this test." She with the face of an Angel, stunning blue eyes. Heart so beautiful, his mighty soul cries. No man would stand, in the Knight's way. Yet there are things, much deeper at play. Days and nights in the desert, plays tricks on the mind. Time has no meaning, as it begins to unwind. He heads into the valley, the valley of death. Gods willing, he won't breathe his last breath Witches enchantresses, orbs of blue light. Naked nymphs dancing, in the glowing moonlight. He dismounts, calls out the Prince's name The Prince is engaged In a deadly game The prince responds, "please leave me be. I am being pleasured, by the beauty you see." The creatures of the night, seek his seed, In exchange they promise, to satisfy every need. The Knight, strong and true. He sees beyond, nimble bodies of blue. The voice of his Jessica, whispers in his heart. With his sword, he tears the illusion apart. Bodies of the demons in a pile they lay He fights through the evening Until light of day The Prince freed, from a prison of lies. Fooled by illusion, he didn't realize. A Knight strong and brave, loyal and wise. Evil banished, he claims his prize. Home to his Princess the Kingdom saved. Triumphant return the banners are waved. A Heros welcome a true loves kiss. Endings don't come much happier than this. Medieval Idealism, contest Written July 30th 2013.

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Date: 9/11/2013 9:36:00 PM
Simply Fantastic! ... This is my kind of lingo of legends (lol) ... Seriously tho' I enjoyed this read from beginning to end ... You're a Bard, yes you are ... I was looking for the poem you suggested, but I'll find it later as I enjoy the quests from your mind ... MoonBee
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Date: 8/25/2013 2:18:00 PM
Well done, Sir Richard. enjoyable account of a daring and dashing rescue.... Congratulations..... Jake
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Date: 8/25/2013 3:09:00 AM
nothing can be happier than this Congrats on yr win. Morgan
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/25/2013 7:20:00 AM
Thanks Danesh, you are kind.
Date: 8/24/2013 7:53:00 PM
well done Richard...SKAT
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/25/2013 7:20:00 AM
Thanks SKAT
Date: 8/23/2013 2:37:00 PM
Amazing poem, Richard, and very well written! I really enjoyed reading this! Congratulations on your win, as well. Thank you for reading my poem "Forbidden Love", and, for your great comments. It really means a lot!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/23/2013 2:43:00 PM
My pleasure Kelly.
Date: 8/22/2013 11:08:00 AM
A great story! Congrats on your win... Loved reading it.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/22/2013 11:56:00 AM
Thanks Carol, a real compliment coming from a fine story teller like yourself.
Date: 8/21/2013 7:22:00 PM
You told the story well Richard...congrats on a great win
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/22/2013 11:56:00 AM
Thanks Joseph
Date: 8/21/2013 6:55:00 PM
I would think your is one of the best stories....loved it !! I love that last line! Congratulations!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/22/2013 11:57:00 AM
Thanks, I enjoyed writing this one.
Date: 8/21/2013 6:17:00 PM
I was unquestionably struck by the dedication and valor of this knight. The angelic princess as the thought that drives him to heroic deeds in a weary quest was an excellent idea, as that is practically the epitome of medaeval idealism.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/22/2013 11:58:00 AM
Thanks for including my tale in your winners list. Much appreciated.
Date: 8/2/2013 2:32:00 PM
An epic story Rick, I think you covered it well, bravery, love, chivalry, evil and wishes that come true. Great Write, good luck in the contest. Take care, Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/22/2013 12:00:00 PM
Thanks Richard, it appears your luck was helpful.
Date: 8/2/2013 8:29:00 AM
A story well told ....great write....I really enjoyed it...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/2/2013 8:48:00 AM
Thanks Joseph
Date: 7/31/2013 5:37:00 PM
An engaging knight's tale...great medevial setting :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/31/2013 11:04:00 PM
Thanks Karen
Date: 7/31/2013 11:04:00 AM
this brings me back to days of chivalry... enchanting story that delights and enchnats, rich... you're a knight!..:) huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/31/2013 3:15:00 PM
You look so young, I would not have expected you to have been around back then *lol* Thanks for the nice comment.
Date: 7/31/2013 11:03:00 AM
Ahhh the Knight gets the beautiful Jessica...sigh......this was a wonderful happy story Richard...enjoyed.....you are a good story teller
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/31/2013 3:16:00 PM
Thanks Donna, it's nice when the guy ends up with the girl.
Date: 7/31/2013 8:21:00 AM
Outstanding poem, excellent writing,, rhythm and flow great, imagery picture perfect,, what a read loved it, well done my poet friend, blessings to you , sueellen
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/31/2013 3:17:00 PM
Thanks Sueellen.
Date: 7/31/2013 7:57:00 AM
So descriptive-- it shouts Medieval Idealism evoking memories of all those romantic "Knight in Shining Armor" movies. Great play on words, and clever change in mood from 'Fairytale' to 'Surrealism'.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/31/2013 8:14:00 AM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 7/31/2013 7:49:00 AM
Whoo-hoo, what a tale!! Hey, this is good writing, Richard. I enjoyed your story top to bottom. You're bound to do well in the contest with this powerful write. Licia :-)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/31/2013 8:15:00 AM
I hope so, thanks Licia
Date: 7/30/2013 9:03:00 PM
RICHARD! This is so romantic, and sweet, and passionate! A beautiful fairy tale that one can't help but live through...You fulfilled ALL of Isaiah's requirements....You will shine with this piece! You always do....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/31/2013 6:29:00 AM
Thanks Eileen, glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 7/30/2013 6:38:00 PM
Passion filled your pen with this write and I was able to feel every stroke of this wonderful poetic muse that you expressed. wonderful bravo cheri.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/31/2013 7:23:00 AM
Thanks Cheri

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