Knight Rises

He rides towards the setting sun
Further and further from his special one
The sound of his armor clanking with each hoof beat
Perspiration horse and rider oppressive desert heat

He rides through the desert to find the Prince.
Commissioned by the King to bring him home.
All others afraid he rides alone.
He will not stop until he fulfills this pact.
His spirit is strong he chooses to act.

The King makes a promise,
"Brave Knight, bring my son home,
you can have anything,
a castle of stone."
Knight responds, " I will do what you ask.
I will not stop 
Until I complete the task.
Allow me to make 
but one request, 
to marry your daughter Jessica
when I pass this test."

She with the face of an Angel,
stunning blue eyes.
Heart so beautiful,
his mighty soul cries.

No man would stand,
in the Knight's way.
Yet there are things,
much deeper at play.

Days and nights in the desert,
plays tricks on the mind.
Time has no meaning,
as it begins to unwind.
He heads into the valley,
the valley of death.
Gods willing,
he won't breathe his last breath

Witches enchantresses,
orbs of blue light.
Naked nymphs dancing,
in the glowing moonlight.


He dismounts,
calls out the Prince's name
The Prince is engaged
In a deadly game

The prince responds,
"please leave me be.
I am being pleasured,
by the beauty you see."

The creatures of the night,
seek his seed,
In exchange they promise,
to satisfy every need.

The Knight,
strong and true.
He sees beyond,
nimble bodies of blue.

The voice of his Jessica,
whispers in his heart.
With his sword,
he tears the illusion apart.

Bodies of the demons 
in a pile they lay
He fights through the evening
Until light of day

The Prince freed,
from a prison of lies.
Fooled by illusion,
he didn't realize.

A Knight strong and brave,
loyal and wise.
Evil banished,
he claims his prize.

Home to his Princess the Kingdom saved.
Triumphant return the banners are waved.
A Heros welcome a true loves kiss.
Endings don't come much happier than this.


Medieval Idealism, contest
Written July 30th 2013.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 11, 2013 at 9:36 PM
Simply Fantastic! ... This is my kind of lingo of legends (lol) ... Seriously tho' I enjoyed this read from beginning to end ... You're a Bard, yes you are ... I was looking for the poem you suggested, but I'll find it later as I enjoy the quests from your mind ... MoonBee
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August 25, 2013 at 2:18 PM
Well done, Sir Richard. enjoyable account of a daring and dashing rescue.... Congratulations..... Jake
Morgan Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 3:09 AM
nothing can be happier than this Congrats on yr win. Morgan
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August 25, 2013 at 7:20 AM
Thanks Danesh, you are kind.
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August 24, 2013 at 7:53 PM
well done Richard...SKAT
Lamoureux Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 7:20 AM
Thanks SKAT
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August 23, 2013 at 2:37 PM
Amazing poem, Richard, and very well written! I really enjoyed reading this! Congratulations on your win, as well. Thank you for reading my poem "Forbidden Love", and, for your great comments. It really means a lot!
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August 23, 2013 at 2:43 PM
My pleasure Kelly.
Eastman Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 11:08 AM
A great story! Congrats on your win... Loved reading it.
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August 22, 2013 at 11:56 AM
Thanks Carol, a real compliment coming from a fine story teller like yourself.
May Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 7:22 PM
You told the story well Richard...congrats on a great win
Lamoureux Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 11:56 AM
Thanks Joseph
Richards Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 6:55 PM
I would think your is one of the best stories....loved it !! I love that last line! Congratulations!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 11:57 AM
Thanks, I enjoyed writing this one.
Zerbst Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 6:17 PM
I was unquestionably struck by the dedication and valor of this knight. The angelic princess as the thought that drives him to heroic deeds in a weary quest was an excellent idea, as that is practically the epitome of medaeval idealism.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 11:58 AM
Thanks for including my tale in your winners list. Much appreciated.
Seal Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 2:32 PM
An epic story Rick, I think you covered it well, bravery, love, chivalry, evil and wishes that come true. Great Write, good luck in the contest. Take care, Richard
Lamoureux Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 12:00 PM
Thanks Richard, it appears your luck was helpful.
May Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 8:29 AM
A story well told ....great write....I really enjoyed it...
Lamoureux Avatar
August 2, 2013 at 8:48 AM
Thanks Joseph
Anglesey Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 5:37 PM
An engaging knight's tale...great medevial setting :)
Lamoureux Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 11:04 PM
Thanks Karen
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July 31, 2013 at 11:04 AM
this brings me back to days of chivalry... enchanting story that delights and enchnats, rich... you're a knight!..:) huggs
Lamoureux Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 3:15 PM
You look so young, I would not have expected you to have been around back then *lol* Thanks for the nice comment.
Jones Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 11:03 AM
Ahhh the Knight gets the beautiful Jessica...sigh......this was a wonderful happy story Richard...enjoyed.....you are a good story teller
Lamoureux Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 3:16 PM
Thanks Donna, it's nice when the guy ends up with the girl.
Newman Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 8:21 AM
Outstanding poem, excellent writing,, rhythm and flow great, imagery picture perfect,, what a read loved it, well done my poet friend, blessings to you , sueellen
Lamoureux Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 3:17 PM
Thanks Sueellen.
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July 31, 2013 at 7:57 AM
So descriptive-- it shouts Medieval Idealism evoking memories of all those romantic "Knight in Shining Armor" movies. Great play on words, and clever change in mood from 'Fairytale' to 'Surrealism'.
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July 31, 2013 at 8:14 AM
Thanks Kim.
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July 31, 2013 at 7:49 AM
Whoo-hoo, what a tale!! Hey, this is good writing, Richard. I enjoyed your story top to bottom. You're bound to do well in the contest with this powerful write. Licia :-)
Lamoureux Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 8:15 AM
I hope so, thanks Licia
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July 30, 2013 at 9:03 PM
RICHARD! This is so romantic, and sweet, and passionate! A beautiful fairy tale that one can't help but live through...You fulfilled ALL of Isaiah's requirements....You will shine with this piece! You always do....
Lamoureux Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 6:29 AM
Thanks Eileen, glad you enjoyed it.
Dunn Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 6:38 PM
Passion filled your pen with this write and I was able to feel every stroke of this wonderful poetic muse that you expressed. wonderful bravo cheri.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 7:23 AM
Thanks Cheri
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