Elai Cee Poet Haiku

Knight In Night

Mosquito's brave knight
                                           Unstoppable in the night
                                             But fear is one clap 




                                                    ELAI CEE
                                                     @2015
                                                     HAIKU

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Beata Agustin December 13, 2024 at 12:00 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

James Peranteau January 8, 2024 at 10:54 PM forget your beauty, though i comment very little, when i scan and notice the poet sleep'n; it's "crack, wake me up" ;)

James Peranteau May 8, 2018 at 10:22 AM Where is the great writer Elai Cee May 16, 2022 at 5:51 AM Hi James! It's been a long time. I stopped writing poems for years, but I am trying to write more again. Thanks for this overwhelming comment. :)

Poet Destroyer A March 21, 2016 at 10:07 PM nice little poem. Elai. LINDA

Skat A January 15, 2016 at 8:48 PM ELAI, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **

Terry O'Leary December 12, 2015 at 1:55 PM A peril worth fearing! Nice Haiku!!

Paul Callus May 6, 2015 at 5:21 AM Lovely haiku, Elai! I like the image you transmitted to my mind. That final line is impressive. // Thank you for visiting my posts and commenting on my poem "Love is Free". All the best. // paul

Milton Robertson April 28, 2015 at 8:18 PM In a nut shell. So brave yet so fragile. Wonderful.

Hannington Mumo April 27, 2015 at 7:55 AM A tremendously well-worded Haiku. 7++++!

Richard Lamoureux April 23, 2015 at 8:01 AM This is so clever! I really like it! 7! Elai Cee April 23, 2015 at 10:28 AM miss ya Richard. Thanks for the comment

Kp Nunez April 20, 2015 at 1:27 AM Impressive imagery, kabayan. Kim :) Elai Cee April 20, 2015 at 9:19 AM thanks KIM

Eve Roper April 18, 2015 at 1:20 PM 7 - love your haiku, just like my "Mosquito Flight" blessings eve Elai Cee April 19, 2015 at 8:04 AM thanks Eve :)

Jan Allison April 18, 2015 at 1:06 PM very clever haiku:-) Hugs jan xx Elai Cee April 20, 2015 at 1:08 AM hi Jan thanks