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Knight In Night

Mosquito's brave knight
                                           Unstoppable in the night
                                             But fear is one clap 




                                                    ELAI CEE
                                                     @2015
                                                     HAIKU

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/13/2024 12:00:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

James Peranteau

Date: 1/8/2024 10:54:00 PM

forget your beauty, though i comment very little, when i scan and notice the poet sleep'n; it's "crack, wake me up" ;)

James Peranteau

Date: 5/8/2018 10:22:00 AM

Where is the great writer

Elai Cee
Date: 5/16/2022 5:51:00 AM

Hi James! It's been a long time. I stopped writing poems for years, but I am trying to write more again. Thanks for this overwhelming comment. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/21/2016 10:07:00 PM

nice little poem. Elai. LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/15/2016 8:48:00 PM

ELAI, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **

Terry O'Leary

Date: 12/12/2015 1:55:00 PM

A peril worth fearing! Nice Haiku!!

Paul Callus

Date: 5/6/2015 5:21:00 AM

Lovely haiku, Elai! I like the image you transmitted to my mind. That final line is impressive. // Thank you for visiting my posts and commenting on my poem "Love is Free". All the best. // paul