Knife

The ever-hunting
smile of yours cuts me like the
sharpest of all knives.

absenceblueheartbrokenhurtlostsenryu

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Robert Heemstra

May 2, 2016 at 9:16 PM

Sometimes a smile can be so evil! Great write!

Diana Bosa

May 2, 2016 at 11:59 PM

Or sometimes the most precious memory/glimpse can turn into a torture. Thank you! :-)))

Daniel Turner

April 9, 2016 at 9:07 AM

Don't change anything, it's perfect just as it is. Great write. Peace young lady:)

Diana Bosa

April 9, 2016 at 9:23 AM

Thank you so much! :-)))

Lenny Gazbowski

April 9, 2016 at 8:16 AM

Excellent three liner Diana. This is a senyru as its not about nature, I found this out last year ! Strange and beautiful are the endless forms of poetry which one can write. :-)

Diana Bosa

April 9, 2016 at 9:22 AM

No, I would never think such thing, relax! :-D I'm grateful for every kind of advice. :-)

Lenny Gazbowski

April 9, 2016 at 8:34 AM

I hope I didn't come across as a poetry snob Diana, I'm not !

Diana Bosa

April 9, 2016 at 8:25 AM

Thank you so much for your comment and your kind words! :-))) I'm going to change it right now.