Knife

The ever-hunting smile of yours cuts me like the sharpest of all knives.

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Robert Heemstra

Date: 5/2/2016 9:16:00 PM

Sometimes a smile can be so evil! Great write!

Diana Bosa
Date: 5/2/2016 11:59:00 PM

Or sometimes the most precious memory/glimpse can turn into a torture. Thank you! :-)))

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/9/2016 9:07:00 AM

Don't change anything, it's perfect just as it is. Great write. Peace young lady:)

Diana Bosa
Date: 4/9/2016 9:23:00 AM

Thank you so much! :-)))

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/9/2016 8:16:00 AM

Excellent three liner Diana. This is a senyru as its not about nature, I found this out last year ! Strange and beautiful are the endless forms of poetry which one can write. :-)

Diana Bosa
Date: 4/9/2016 9:22:00 AM

No, I would never think such thing, relax! :-D I'm grateful for every kind of advice. :-)

Lenny Gazbowski
Date: 4/9/2016 8:34:00 AM

I hope I didn't come across as a poetry snob Diana, I'm not !

Diana Bosa
Date: 4/9/2016 8:25:00 AM

Thank you so much for your comment and your kind words! :-))) I'm going to change it right now.