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Knead My Luke Warm Heart

knead my beating heart with gasps of longing whispers turn off the alarm

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2012 3:40:00 PM

deep...pd

James Peranteau

Date: 5/28/2011 4:01:00 AM

I'm in mine favz again today Debbie...and fer sure, I am thankful that I've fav'd this write ! Charming lil' write here dear poet ! Have a great weekend...much love, james

James Marshall Goff

Date: 2/25/2011 6:17:00 PM

again and again....nice! Deb!!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/24/2011 10:38:00 PM

HOT hot, Debbie . and yet very COOL

Wandering Butterfly

Date: 2/22/2011 8:57:00 AM

I like this, I think everyone is able to come up with their own underlying meaning behind this senryu, miranda

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/22/2011 12:40:00 AM

love this Debbie, so profound, so sensuous. Harry

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 2/21/2011 7:56:00 PM

Soup mail.

Kash Poet

Date: 2/21/2011 6:09:00 PM

Amazing lines you have penned here Debbie!Love it---kashinath

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/21/2011 4:47:00 PM

That alarm ruins much..Sara

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/21/2011 3:56:00 PM

a unique Senryu. Debbie.....guess you had to be there!

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/21/2011 2:24:00 PM

It must be morning. Good descriptive senryu, Debbie.