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Knead My Luke Warm Heart

knead my beating heart
with gasps of longing whispers 
turn off the alarm

Copyright © Debbie Guzzi | Year Posted 2011

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Poet Destroyer A

December 7, 2012 at 3:40 PM

deep...pd

James Peranteau

May 28, 2011 at 4:01 AM

I'm in mine favz again today Debbie...and fer sure, I am thankful that I've fav'd this write ! Charming lil' write here dear poet ! Have a great weekend...much love, james

James Marshall Goff

February 25, 2011 at 6:17 PM

again and again....nice! Deb!!!!

Andrea Dietrich

February 24, 2011 at 10:38 PM

HOT hot, Debbie . and yet very COOL

Wandering Butterfly

February 22, 2011 at 8:57 AM

I like this, I think everyone is able to come up with their own underlying meaning behind this senryu, miranda

February 22, 2011 at 12:40 AM

love this Debbie, so profound, so sensuous. Harry

Iolanda Scripca

February 21, 2011 at 7:56 PM

Soup mail.

February 21, 2011 at 6:09 PM

Amazing lines you have penned here Debbie!Love it---kashinath

February 21, 2011 at 4:47 PM

That alarm ruins much..Sara

Robert A. Dufresne

February 21, 2011 at 3:56 PM

a unique Senryu. Debbie.....guess you had to be there!

February 21, 2011 at 2:24 PM

It must be morning. Good descriptive senryu, Debbie.

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