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Klimt: Portrait of a Lady In Black

She floats into a room and voices hush,
the silence at effulgence in her bloom,
as crimson rises to her cheeks in blush
to humble scarlet gardens and their plume.

The gown in velvet bides her every curve,
smooth bight of rivers on to ocean's sway
that in such pastel presence do observe
how her translucence rivals light of day.

Though gentle white alyssum may surround
while saffron bloom the jonquils in their wake,
her coif in glinting chestnut is thus crowned
as alder trees beside an autumn lake.

A memory in oil is all she leaves,
but luster as in life she still achieves.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 8:03 PM
Charming poem. Congrats on your win, Dale.
Breedt Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 4:54 AM
Hi Dale a sonnet of beauty and an excellent win too. Descriptions to envy here.
Cozart Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 8:16 AM
Thanks, Jannie.
Roper Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 1:53 PM
Great sonnet , Dale, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve~`*
Gupta Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 8:38 AM
Nice tribute through Sonnetry ... Congratulations on your nice win ...
Cozart Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 9:52 AM
Thanks, Probir!
Barden Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 10:27 PM
Congratulations on your win, Dale ... blessings and happy holidays, my friend! :-)
Cozart Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 8:19 AM
Thanks, Greg.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 10:19 PM
Congratulations, Dale on your fine win.
Cozart Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 8:19 AM
Thanks, Subimal!!
Andresen Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 2:37 PM
- I could see her by your wonderful words, Dale - Luck in the contest - Best wishes for a peaceful and beautiful Christmas to you and your family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cozart Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 3:45 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise, you, too!
Anish Avatar
December 19, 2017 at 7:57 PM
Nice tribute to some great art! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Cozart Avatar
December 20, 2017 at 8:32 AM
Thank you, sir.
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 4:04 PM
Wow Dale! Your poem is lovelier than the painting. Your creativity is off the charts my friend! A sonnet to be really proud of This beautiful sonnet is going into my Faves! : )
Cozart Avatar
December 18, 2017 at 4:23 PM
Aw, Connie, thanks so much for your compliments!
Smith Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 12:27 PM
Terrific Sonnet Dale, lovely, best wishes in the contest...
Cozart Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 1:53 PM
Thanks, Charlie!
Allison Avatar
December 10, 2017 at 8:54 AM
An absolute beauty Dale, I think this is one of your best sonnets my friend, your use of colour and imagery is second to none! Into my faves:-) hugs jan xx
Cozart Avatar
December 10, 2017 at 10:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jan!!
Manaila Avatar
December 10, 2017 at 8:21 AM
A very beautiful poem,Dale.
Cozart Avatar
December 10, 2017 at 8:24 AM
Thank you, Ghita.
Smith Avatar
December 7, 2017 at 1:11 PM
An amazing Sonnet Dale. Terrific imagery and word pairings.
Cozart Avatar
December 7, 2017 at 1:58 PM
Thanks, Tim.
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December 6, 2017 at 8:26 AM
Wow u brought the painting to life in vivid realistic poetic description. I could imagine myself so blushing upon entering a gathering. Your word choice is artistic. Kudos. Soo nice to read from u again, hope u will my latest too. U did encourage me to write more so I finally got time.
Cozart Avatar
December 6, 2017 at 8:34 AM
Thanks so much!
Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2017 at 3:12 PM
wow, her hair compared to an alder tree by an autumn lake. You are so amazing with imagery and metaphor, Dale. This is a beauty.
Cozart Avatar
December 5, 2017 at 3:19 PM
Thanks, Andrea!
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December 4, 2017 at 4:03 PM
A lovely write, dear Dale! Sensuous and blushing, a standout painting!
Cozart Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 4:15 PM
Thanks so much, Kim!
Krampe Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 2:30 PM
Beautiful sonnet that fits the painting very well. Good luck in the contest.
Cozart Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 2:37 PM
Thanks so much, Agnes!
Gondolf Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 12:17 PM
Dale, this is such a wonderful sonnet especially the final couplet. Her beauty is forever immortalized. John
Cozart Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 12:22 PM
Thanks so much, John!
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December 4, 2017 at 11:31 AM
Gorgeous Sonnet! Good luck in the contest :) xomo
Cozart Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 12:22 PM
Thanks, Maureen!
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