Kittens

needles and wool twine
frolic and playtime
creatures we adore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Bellen Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 9:05 AM
perfect picture!i love kittens and this poem makes me smile..>>charmane
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June 10, 2011 at 3:45 PM
this was very well written.. cory
Dietrich Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 9:07 PM
Susan, you can call this one a senryu! It's adorable. If you prefer traditional senryu, you only would need to add two syllables to the middle line,but as it stands it can be also a modern senryu!
Guzzi Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 5:36 PM
yes we do, hopefully I will find one soon! Thanks so much for the kind words and stopping by I'm always available for help just soup mail me. Light & Love
Mills Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 3:35 PM
love to soup mail you! Can someone let me know how to send soup mail. Susan
Mehta Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 3:40 PM
Creative and lovely expressions on kittens, nicde images, Susan
La France Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 2:11 PM
I "adore "kittens also, Susan, nothing more lovable, thanks for the visit to my poetry~~
Sweetheart Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 2:00 PM
oh Susan this is cute and clever and my cats enjoy the twine too.. a super piece and so happy to see u as I was thinking of u just yesterday luv..
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