Kitteclipse

Have you seen the morning rise
of the big ole smiley moon?
Or have you seen an eclipse of the sun
the daylight goes away.
I looked around the clock struck noon
I think I'll take a nap,
since it is mid-day.
It's actually quite natural,
like my cat upon my lap,
sleeping after some kitty fun.
She's laying there so casual,
then she softly sighs.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Owens Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 7:34 PM
Nice...enjoyed...Reminds me of my cat that I had some years back...Marty
Meade Stephenson Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 11:37 AM
Another of your wonderful writes my dear....great job...love you~Mary
Pickett Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 8:35 AM
I have two pit bulls I miss having my feline......:JP]
Kendrick Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 7:17 AM
Sounds like a relaxed kind of day. Keep the pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my writes. Sara
Culverhouse Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 7:10 AM
sounds peaceful, I have a lazy grey cat
Sweetheart Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 6:47 AM
What an adorable picture of imagery here Richard... quite enjoyable .. my two cats, Gabriel (the baddie) and Bronco (the goodie) are watching me as I write... and of course there is Jo Jo Puffs.. my huge leopard on my bed (not real).. haha.. great Pantoum.. another form of poetry to challenge me... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie, "Sweetheart"
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