Kite-Surfer and Observer

Kite-Surfer prepares for his thrilling ride
With double-checked gear, wades into the tide

Observer sits noticing all that’s around
And sees the direction where’s Kite-Surfer’s bound

Like an outgoing message that’s waiting to send
Kite-Surfer is patient, then catches the wind

Observer sits calmly beachside near the trees
From safe distance he knows more than Kite-Surfer sees

Soon, he in the water takes off like a flash
But direction of winds can never long last

Change in conditions, The Observer sees
From breeze on his face and the movement of trees

Kite-Surfer in wetsuit, armored head to toe
Cannot know direction of the next blow

And so he must catch the wind swiftly by feel
Attachment to moment seems all that is real

But never is able to choose any course
Like a passenger on a wild unbridled horse

And if judgement falters, momentum is lost
He sinks to his neck, failure could be the cost

When he’s low in the water, his only ambition:
To capture the wind and continue that mission

Watching bold Kite-Surfer safe from the beach
The Observer surely knows much they could teach

Vantage point lets Observer see mistakes
That Kite-Surfer made before leaving long wakes

The one who sits beachside, safely observing
Is totally void of all longing or yearning

Not caring which direction the wind blows
He watches Kite-Surfer like someone he knows

If you find yourself sunk, at the end of your rope
And the sky seems to fail you, one should not lose hope

Instead change your view
As if you’re outside you

And witness your actions like you’re far away:
A perspective-shifting game we can play

Detaching your ego, dissolving all fear,
Put yourself out there instead of being here

Seeing bigger picture can make one clairvoyant
Like Observer helping Kite-Surfer stay buoyant
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Andresen Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 9:12 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the "Stoicism As Way of Life" contest...great writing, Robert :) -
Agustin Avatar
November 27, 2023 at 9:03 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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November 26, 2023 at 12:24 PM
You have written a wonderful poem here..
Meadows Avatar
November 26, 2023 at 2:22 AM
A brilliant poem! Enjoyed reading this. It's a fav for me.
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November 25, 2023 at 11:42 PM
Enjoyed your poems inspiration
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