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Kites and Sunsets

Spilled paint on the clouds Nora pulling at the strings The kite an autumn letter Caught upon the wind It dips in the dusk colors As though never to come down.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 11/20/2017 12:44:00 PM
A fantastic piece from a fantastic poet.
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Date: 7/3/2010 6:39:00 PM
Super enjoyed the imagery in this choka, Grace-- very nice first line too :) --nikko :)
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Date: 6/30/2010 7:34:00 AM
I remember kiting with my grandpa when I was a child!!! Only nice memories! Enjoyed this your write today and thank you for commenting "Butterflies"..:)..Gert
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Date: 6/29/2010 7:44:00 PM
Great Choka and hope to see more of your wonderful work. Love Faire
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Date: 6/28/2010 9:10:00 PM
Very visual and vivid Grace... enjoyed your Choka..and congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup also.. enjoyed both.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation..luv..
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