Kites and Sunsets

Spilled paint on the clouds
Nora pulling at the strings
The kite an autumn letter
Caught upon the wind
It dips in the dusk colors
As though never to come down.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Gi-Sa Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 12:44 PM
A fantastic piece from a fantastic poet.
K. Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 6:39 PM
Super enjoyed the imagery in this choka, Grace-- very nice first line too :) --nikko :)
Knop Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 7:34 AM
I remember kiting with my grandpa when I was a child!!! Only nice memories! Enjoyed this your write today and thank you for commenting "Butterflies"..:)..Gert
Lucas Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 7:44 PM
Great Choka and hope to see more of your wonderful work. Love Faire
Sweetheart Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 9:10 PM
Very visual and vivid Grace... enjoyed your Choka..and congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup also.. enjoyed both.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation..luv..
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