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Kites

Tethered to little reason we send our kites aloft to see them bounce about and dance to their own rhythms. So skyward our hopes are sent to an indifferent god.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/22/2009 9:44:00 AM
Indifferent? Depends on how one thinks of IT, whatever IT is. I like the way you set this up, no B.S.. just good poetry. Great write, Shadow Man. Love, daver
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Date: 12/5/2008 4:44:00 AM
I think this is excellent. It captures that spark of the imagination well and the enjambment only reinforces the way that the reader can find their own way. It reminds me of Lorine Niedecker in the brevity and the overall impact.
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Date: 12/4/2008 7:16:00 PM
Nice poem...Raul
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