Notes About The Poem
For Brian Strand's Your Choice M Poetry Contest 24 May 2025

kite hiku


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                            wings soar on west wind
                      shoes forgotten on the grass~ 
                                           dreams   
                                              tied   
                                                to
                                               the
                                               sky
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George Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 6:42 AM
Lovely pictorial representation. Congratulations on your great placement, dear Jez.
Wolf Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 9:01 PM
Your creativity sparkles, JCB. Lovely! Happiness and Joy, Gershon
Goldsmith Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 10:36 AM
Love your creative "kite hiku" write and shape. Have a great weekend.......
Andresen Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 10:16 AM
- Inventive in hiku creativity, Jcb :) - Well done and good luck :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs
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