Trina Layne Poet Rhyme

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Honourable Mention 

Brian Strand's Poetry Contest

Judged: 28h March, 2025

Kite Flying

Now the winds are here 
I can fly my kite.
I'll sail it through the night 
to touch stars of the air. 
 
Above all, over fears
paper dreams shall sizzle in flight. 
Now the winds are here 
I can fly my kite. 
 
Skillful as I steer
Must avoid doubt, tall trees, streetlights ...
that dreams aren't torn and don't rapidly alight, 
inviting sour tears.
Now the winds are here.

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Sara Kendrick March 30, 2025 at 2:42 PM I'm delighted to see your winning work in Brian's winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K Trina Layne March 30, 2025 at 4:05 PM Thanks, Sara. I appreciate you :) When I joined PS a few months ago, you were one of the first sponsors to consider any of my writing seriously.

I Am Anaya March 29, 2025 at 10:43 AM Congratulations on your honorable mention, Trina! No more tear wishes ~ I Am Anaya Trina Layne March 29, 2025 at 11:34 AM Yes, no more tears :) Thanks for reading and your message of congratulations.