Kite Flies Away

I had aspired to hover high on the horizon where the blue sky meets the land and fly like a colored kite made of dreams in the air carrying the scent of the spring from the blooming garden I left I would float like a bird and ride on the flank of drifting cloud taking me to the distant unknown sky I would make my home won’t return to concrete jungle for the string I w i l l s n a p f l y o n w i n g s
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Date: 3/6/2025 6:48:00 AM
concrete jungle is very thoughtful. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/13/2025 8:43:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 3/5/2025 11:33:00 AM
So whimsical and clever! Xo
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/13/2025 8:44:00 AM
Many thanks.
Date: 1/5/2024 12:51:00 PM
This was so creative! Congratulations on your placement in he contest..
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/8/2024 5:09:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and nice comment.
Date: 5/5/2018 2:38:00 PM
Awesome and really well done, Subimal!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/7/2018 2:53:00 AM
Thank you, Edward, for your visit.
Date: 5/4/2018 9:07:00 PM
Brilliant, Subimal. Lovely poem. Congrats on your well deserved podium win. A FAVE for me.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/5/2018 2:40:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 5/4/2018 12:43:00 PM
Wow! An awesome presentation of a well-written poem about freedom. I don't understand how you do it but it is stunning to see and read. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! :)
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/5/2018 2:40:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan for appreciating the poem.
Date: 5/4/2018 10:23:00 AM
Subimal, such a wonderful Concrete poem with your well-formed kite and uplifting message about your flight from the concrete jungle. Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/5/2018 2:39:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra for your nioce comments.
Date: 5/4/2018 5:50:00 AM
Congratulations Subimal on your bronze medal win in my contest! The competition was fierce at the end but your kite managed to float above the rest, wonderfully creative penning and composition. xomo
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/5/2018 2:38:00 AM
Thank you, Maureen for your encouraging comments and for placing the poem. We all like to fly kite.
Date: 3/26/2018 10:30:00 PM
Come let's fly a kite, yep that did me excite. Good luck in the contest... Mick
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/27/2018 2:18:00 AM
Thank you, Mick for visiting.
Date: 3/25/2018 6:39:00 AM
What a fabulous form you created with your shape poem. I too wrote about escaping the concrete jungle but our poems are so so different! Good luck in the contest Subimal:-) hugs jan xx
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/25/2018 8:04:00 AM
Thank you, Jan for visiting. Yes, our poems are on quite different themes. I wish you a very good luck as well.
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