Kite Flies Away

I had aspired to hover high on the horizon where the blue sky meets the land and fly like a colored kite made of dreams in the air carrying the scent of the spring from the blooming garden I left I would float like a bird and ride on the flank of drifting cloud taking me to the distant unknown sky I would make my home won’t return to concrete jungle for the string I w i l l s n a p f l y o n w i n g s
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mysore Avatar
March 6, 2025 at 6:48 AM
concrete jungle is very thoughtful. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 8:43 AM
Thank you.
Woods Avatar
March 5, 2025 at 11:33 AM
So whimsical and clever! Xo
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 8:44 AM
Many thanks.
One Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 12:51 PM
This was so creative! Congratulations on your placement in he contest..
Sinha-Roy Avatar
January 8, 2024 at 5:09 AM
Thank you for your visit and nice comment.
Ibeh Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 2:38 PM
Awesome and really well done, Subimal!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 2:53 AM
Thank you, Edward, for your visit.
Gauthier Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 9:07 PM
Brilliant, Subimal. Lovely poem. Congrats on your well deserved podium win. A FAVE for me.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 2:40 AM
Thank you, Line.
Gentry Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 12:43 PM
Wow! An awesome presentation of a well-written poem about freedom. I don't understand how you do it but it is stunning to see and read. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 2:40 AM
Thank you so much, Susan for appreciating the poem.
Haight Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 10:23 AM
Subimal, such a wonderful Concrete poem with your well-formed kite and uplifting message about your flight from the concrete jungle. Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 2:39 AM
Thank you, Sandra for your nioce comments.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 5:50 AM
Congratulations Subimal on your bronze medal win in my contest! The competition was fierce at the end but your kite managed to float above the rest, wonderfully creative penning and composition. xomo
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 2:38 AM
Thank you, Maureen for your encouraging comments and for placing the poem. We all like to fly kite.
Talbot Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 10:30 PM
Come let's fly a kite, yep that did me excite. Good luck in the contest... Mick
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 2:18 AM
Thank you, Mick for visiting.
Allison Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 6:39 AM
What a fabulous form you created with your shape poem. I too wrote about escaping the concrete jungle but our poems are so so different! Good luck in the contest Subimal:-) hugs jan xx
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 8:04 AM
Thank you, Jan for visiting. Yes, our poems are on quite different themes. I wish you a very good luck as well.
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