Augustus Black Poet Monorhyme

Kite

A little girl begin to fly a kite.
She smiled with great hope as it took a flight;
She was joyous when it went at great height.
An evil kite came and she lost the fight
The kite flew away far-off from her sight,
And little cute girl cried from day to night.
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Date - 9th January 2017

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Darlene De Beaulieu June 5, 2017 at 5:30 PM Hello Augustus,this is a sad poem about the girl.It is sad that she had lost her kite.I have enjoyed this poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 16, 2017 at 4:00 AM - It feels like losing a game ... painful experience for a young child (but must be learned) - A great poem, Augustus - // Anne-Lise :) Augustus Black January 16, 2017 at 11:21 AM Lovely comment, thanks - Augustus.

Probir Gupta January 9, 2017 at 9:41 AM Very nice write ... Let it help the little girl to grow up to the hard realities of life ... Augustus Black January 9, 2017 at 12:26 PM Thanks for the great comment, Sir. - Augustus.