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Kite

Kite A plastic colored bird, waltzing in the sky, tethered to, but looking down upon, a boy. Kite A plastic colored bird, waltzing in the sky, looking like, but looking down upon, his mates. Kite A plastic colored bird, tangos with his mates, circles in the sky, up, down, up, guided by, careful hands. Kite A plastic colored bird, ripples through the sky, crashes into sand, plunk, thud, splat, brought down by, careless hands. Boy, looking up upon, tethered to, waltzing in the sky, a plastic colored bird, a kite. NoelsArt Comments: At Ocean City, Maryland, stunt kites amazed me with their acrobatics. Kites are no longer boring. Kites are cool. FEEDBACK WELCOME.

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Date: 3/26/2019 1:35:00 PM
Nice bit of repetition with a nice shift at the end...
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Noel Flater
Date: 3/26/2019 2:28:00 PM
John, thanks for reading my poem. You have a keen eye. I have performed this poem with props. Noel from NoelsArt
Date: 1/1/2019 7:36:00 AM
i like the repeat of this "A plastic colored bird, waltzing in the sky" - it is a friendly, happy, tribute poem which seems to give the kite a distinct personality, Noel. Nice!
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Noel Flater
Date: 3/9/2019 6:12:00 PM
Thanks Caren, I like simple things. I'm publishing one poem a week. Feel free to check out my other poems. NoelsArt