Kitchen Island

As I sit awhile at my kitchen window
And float weightless in the pond yonder
What if you and I were those geese?
My unmoored thoughts always wander.

Basking in the sprawling lap of nature
Soaking in curative warm sun’s rays
Waiting and looking out for each other
Turning our necks with easy natural grace

Me,following keenly your step and wade
Wanting nothing but your presence
Enamored with the haven of your gaze
Pure love-my life’s sole essence

On water, land or the limitless air
We could float away on our whim
And when furry goslings came along
We could teach them how to swim

Adrift,away in my mystical island
“Beep!” ,beckons broccoli in the oven rack
Naked cold of granite bites me hard
And once again reality snatches me back.


Written 05/19/2016 for Nayda Ivette Negron's contest "Reality"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/13/2016 7:11:00 AM
Sara, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/15/2016 8:20:00 AM
Thanks a lot laura!
Date: 6/12/2016 7:37:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Sara. Your flight of fantasy from the kitchen island was pure genius. Congratulations on your win. ~karam~
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/15/2016 8:20:00 AM
Thanks Karam, appreciate your words
Date: 6/12/2016 5:09:00 PM
I do remember this from before and how much I adored it then. For me, one of the very best on the list! Congratulations.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/15/2016 8:19:00 AM
Thanks Andrea,yes this is a true one,not fictional:)
Date: 6/12/2016 3:41:00 PM
Hi, Sara, I am back again to congratulate you on your fine placement in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/15/2016 8:18:00 AM
Thanks Sandra,lots of love.
Date: 6/12/2016 12:48:00 PM
AH, yes those magical, mystical "Islands of daydream".....beautifully done Sara.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/12/2016 12:53:00 PM
Thanks a lot John!I wrote this one for the Reality contest originally:)
Date: 6/12/2016 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations Sara on the Island of Fantasy contest.
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 6/12/2016 12:53:00 PM
Thanks again Nayda for picking my kitchen dreams:)
Date: 5/21/2016 3:44:00 PM
Love it Sara...was right in the pond. Nice approach to the theme, and congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 5/21/2016 8:31:00 PM
Thanks Sandra,congrats on your top placement!
Date: 5/20/2016 2:11:00 PM
Congratulations Sara on the placement of the contest
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 5/20/2016 2:27:00 PM
Thanks a lot Nayda:)
Date: 5/19/2016 8:47:00 PM
Forgot to say, Awesome title for it too.
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Date: 5/19/2016 8:46:00 PM
wowowow, this is outstanding writing. gosh, I thought you were doing this for the ducklings contest and then I saw it was for the reality contest In any event, a FAVE
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 5/20/2016 2:27:00 PM
Thanks for your kindness Andrea!
Date: 5/19/2016 9:38:00 AM
Warm congratulation. A wonderful Kitchen Island in which passionately a person live. Like Robinson in a similar place was I: while trying to make a pie, I burned it; while trying to write a poem I burned myself: while trying to make my soup, by mistake I entered the PoetrySoup.
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Date: 5/19/2016 9:48:00 AM
Haha, you are funny,Thanks Ovidu!
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