Kissing Suzanne

My first love was called Sue Heather,
I thought I’d love her forever.
We kissed and came to grief:
With braces on her teeth,
She stapled my lips together.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 24, 2011 at 11:15 AM
this was a very good poem, funny at the end but very good. i look forward to reading more of your work.
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April 10, 2011 at 9:25 AM
Hahaha, great Limerick Jack! Best of luck in the contest!!! Love, Gert
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April 9, 2011 at 12:20 PM
Very funny, Jack!! Young lovers blessed with locking braces. LOL I think Frank will enjoy this entry. Wishing you success in his contest! Love, Carolyn
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April 8, 2011 at 10:49 PM
hahaha. Great punch line!
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April 8, 2011 at 4:27 PM
Hilarious Jack.. could just see this scene happening with your great rhyming words luv.. good luck in Frank's contest .. he will surely enjoy laughing all the way luv..
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April 8, 2011 at 1:58 PM
i can see that in mind, very funny, enjoyed it. thank you for reading last ride to the vets and for your comment, yes it was a hard thing to do, am still hurting and its been over a year, sorry about your dogs also.
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