Kissing Lips

As his moist lips touched mines everything in the world vanished. It was just him and I in this big universe. I had never felt such bliss It all started with one a kiss As his succulent lips left mines I felt their imprint all day long I never tire of his lips tangoing with mines Contest: Kissing Sponsor: Bobby May 12/23/19

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Silent One

Date: 12/26/2019 7:29:00 AM

Sounds like amazing lips...

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/26/2019 7:21:00 AM

Hey Alexis, know I have been scarce but went away for a couple of days to rest and relax. Congratulations my friend on your winning poem - never tire of tangoing lips - I love this. Blessings my dear friend. Jennifer.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/26/2019 2:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your very passionate descriptive win! Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/25/2019 1:37:00 PM

- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Alexis :) - hugs and Marry Christmas // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 12/25/2019 7:18:00 AM

Nicely done Alexis, Congrats on your win

Brenda Chiri

Date: 12/24/2019 6:20:00 PM

Alexis congrats on your win!;)

Bobby May

Date: 12/24/2019 2:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Alexis!!

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/24/2019 3:40:00 PM

Hi Bobby, You held a great contest. I appreciate my placement in your contest. Merry Christmas Eve:-) Alexis

Charles Messina

Date: 12/24/2019 4:48:00 AM

A tender poem, Alexis. Good luck in the contest. Happy Holidays to you and your entire family :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/23/2019 9:45:00 PM

a kiss that lingers is magical... best wishes in the contest... :) hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/23/2019 4:21:00 PM

Lovely, romantic write, Alexis--all the best.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/23/2019 3:44:00 PM

ohh err a passionate poem Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/23/2019 3:29:00 PM

A wonderful ink kisser this pretty poem be, Lexi! Dreamy verses too ... As his succulent lips left mines, I felt their imprint all day long. I never tire of his lips tangoing with mines. Poetry purity ~ pureza de Poesía. Love and more love always.

Chris Green

Date: 12/23/2019 3:03:00 PM

Sounds like an amazing kiss to me. beautifully done my friend, this one had me licking my lips.