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Kissing a fat woman

Kissing the lips of a fat woman 
Is delicious like Tania 
It feels like sliding on the slippery floor 
But you only will not fall miserably 

Kissing her cheeks feels like sucking an ice cream 
Hugging a fat woman feels like hugging a mattress 
It feels comfortable like the sofa set 
Hugging her feels like hugging a novel pillow 

Taking her by the hand 
Is not taking the cow by the horn 
It’s as comfortable as the King’s walking stick 
Touching her garment, means you are alive 

After loving a fat woman 
I did not buy an ice cream 
My mattress was no longer comfortable before hugging her 
I had to hug her to add to the comfort of my mattress 

When she is not there 
I am never healed and pass away 
She is my comfort zone 
A day without her; I kick the bucket

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/6/2017 7:41:00 AM
Such a cool debut poem, Sabbath. This made me smile broadly. Delicious truth wrapped in candy bar caramel sweetness. Mighty fine poetry. A belated welcome to PSoup. Enjoy the wide ranging poetic menu. Your poetry flavor only adds more savor to the mix. May love light your path always. Romantic Warrior
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Date: 10/8/2016 4:49:00 PM
Mamer K, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Sabbath De Yecouba
Date: 10/12/2016 8:37:00 AM
Your criticism is welcomed. Thanks once again.
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Sabbath De Yecouba
Date: 10/12/2016 6:57:00 AM
I started writing poems when I was in primary school in Kakuma, Kenya. I had joined a drama club in early age. I had been contributing to FanStory, which I think is a sister to poetry soup. But I had not been using my real name like this. I had been writing as Sabbath de Yecouba, my pen name. I am a published author. I have published 2 poetry collections(Born to write and Mentored by a rebel), one anthology of short stories(The Mysterious Ghost) and one Novel(Betrayed: For love). All are available on amazon but were all zero work in my personal finance. They were self-published. I am a South Sudanese who now lives in Kiryandongo Refugee Settlement in Uganda. Cheers.
Date: 10/8/2016 7:04:00 AM
Funnyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy......brilliant presentation.Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love...........//Manmath//
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Sabbath De Yecouba
Date: 10/12/2016 6:47:00 AM
Thanks for encouragement. Pleasure is mine!
Date: 10/8/2016 4:00:00 AM
Mamer, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Sabbath De Yecouba
Date: 10/8/2016 4:05:00 AM
Thanks for your time and concern. I appreciate your offer of befriending me. I am bound. We shall be in touch. Pleasure.