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'Kisses of the Rain'

After a night of rain, the sun, its shimmer, a welcome like no other. A new day starts with such promise, an array of flora across the pasture a gazelle leaping all over the place. The kisses of the rain still visible a delight for my eyes to behold.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/10/2011 11:48:00 AM
Oh Wilma, What a wonderful and beautiful piece you have penned here. I imagined it all as I read it. Lovely my dear As Always, Shar
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Date: 2/2/2011 3:35:00 PM
Magnificent view in your lines of this wonderful form Wilma my friend.. enjoyed with luv.. and those kisses are enticing in the rain..luv..
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Date: 2/1/2011 10:09:00 AM
Very fresh. I can just inhale the rain drenched pasture. Love, Dave
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Date: 2/1/2011 12:27:00 AM
Wonderful imagery Wilma!This form is new to me-gotta try it-kashinath
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Date: 1/31/2011 9:29:00 PM
Wilma.I need to rush off but I hope to see a new post from you tomorrow. Luv ya, Andrea
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Date: 1/31/2011 4:44:00 PM
great one Wilma.... you sure are learning and using alot of poetry forms! i never heard of them and there you go again! You go Girl!! Thankis for your funny comment. Always encouraging. hope all is well woth you
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Date: 1/31/2011 3:20:00 AM
Wow! a great one indeeed. Kisses of the rain are such a blessing to the land. they bring joy from heavens down to earth. i enjoyed reading.
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Date: 1/30/2011 9:02:00 PM
oh, I could just envision that jumping gazelle. You live in such a cool place, Wilma.And think about Australia. I would love seeing kangeroos all around me. Cute poem and form! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/30/2011 2:56:00 PM
I enjoyed this lovely soothing write on kisses of the Rain with awe, Wilma
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Date: 1/30/2011 12:42:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Excellent line about the gazelle..Deer here that decorate the landscape but they have their non-poetic side..Sara
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Date: 1/30/2011 11:15:00 AM
What a magnificent immage of the pasture's dew as well as the beautiful flowers. How grand it must be to see the gazelle leaping! One for my favorites, Wilma. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/30/2011 10:09:00 AM
ohh wilma, i am totally charmed by your keen sense of imagery here... divine!! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 1/30/2011 10:08:00 AM
Wow you are opening my eyes to new forms, missy-- have to look up kwansaba next time--- this sure has beautiful images in it and I have to love that gazelle--it sure lends a very graceful image and "kisses of rain" is just adorable-- even more so if they were chocolate kisses? heehee kidding---btw maybe you could remove the apostrophe in "its" pretty please? thank you-- beautiful write as always missy :D --hugs to you
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Date: 1/30/2011 9:32:00 AM
beautiful piece Wilma
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Date: 1/30/2011 8:40:00 AM
Good morning Wilma, i would love waking up to the sweetness of pouring rain.. Not the heavy storms.. The gazelle,, wow what a leaping image... delightful to read.. enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 1/30/2011 8:30:00 AM
And a framed piece of art you have painted for me on this Sunday morning here in NY... too my fav's it goes...with love Michael
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